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Package Description:
This two-hour package is designed for high school and transfer students (or the parent supporting them) who have drafted their college essays and want thoughtful, strategic feedback that strengthens their voice without losing authenticity. Rather than surface-level edits or line-by-line corrections, this is a high-level, big-picture review focused on helping your writing feel clear, cohesive, and genuinely yours, especially in a time when so many essays risk sounding generic. This package includes one round of feedback to give you clear direction for future revision. What’s included: ✨ One 15-minute check-in call (at the beginning) to understand your story, goals, and where you’re feeling stuck 📝 One set of high-level editorial feedback on up to two supplemental essays (focused on narrative strength, structure, clarity, and how well your writing reflects your authentic voice) (Note: this does not include line-by-line editing or detailed copyedits) 💡 Targeted, honest guidance on what’s working, what’s not cohesive, and how to strengthen your essays without sounding generic or over-polished 🧭 Clear next steps for future revision, so you know exactly how to move forward with clarity This is ideal for: ✨ Students who are thoughtful and self-aware but are struggling to translate that depth into writing ✨ Students seeking feedback that pushes them to think more deeply, elevating their essays rather than flattening them into something generic
What you'll get from this package
Clear, personalized direction from your check-in call so your revisions are focused and intentional
More authentic, compelling essays with a clear understanding of what to improve
Defined next steps after one round of feedback so you can revise confidently on your own
Additional details
Coaching delivered via live sessions and .
My coaching style is intentional, compassionate, and empowering. I combine clear admissions strategy with a values-based, empathetic approach. I help you reflect, find your story, and express it with intention. Through thoughtful questions and direct feedback, I guide you in shaping authentic, compelling essays that aren't generic. The result is writing that feels true to you while also being clear, cohesive, and compelling.
- Scope of Review: High-level feedback focused on structure, narrative strength, authenticity, and alignment with prompts. - No Line Editing: This package does not include line-by-line editing, grammar correction, or proofreading. - Number of Drafts: One round of feedback per essay submission. - Turnaround Time: Feedback will be provided within five business days from receipt of your drafts. - Check-in Call: Includes a brief call to discuss goals, themes, and strategy before review. - Student Work: Student agrees that all submitted work is their own original writing. Confidentiality: All drafts and feedback will be kept confidential between coach and student.
Services included:
Essays
Editing
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