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Write Powerful College Essays

Write Powerful College Essays

Offered by Sarah E.

5.0

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Authentic Narrative Coach | 15+ Years Experience | USC Admissions

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Admissions Committee at University of Southern California

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Description

This package is designed for college applicants aiming to craft exceptional essays that maximize their chances of admission. This package includes the following, but feel free to adapt based on your unique situation and goals: - Initial Kickoff and Planning Session: Begin with an in-depth kickoff session with your coach to discuss your background, goals, experiences, and aspirations. This session sets the stage for creating compelling college essays. - Application Strategy: Collaborate with your coach to identify your unique points of differentiation as an applicant and strategize the best ways to highlight these in your essays. - Essay Brainstorming: Dive deep into your background and experiences with your coach to uncover themes, perspectives, and qualities that set you apart. Together, you’ll explore various narratives to ensure your essays capture your true essence. - Essay Crafting: Work with your coach to craft powerful narratives rooted in your unique story that help the admissions committee understand why you would be a valuable addition to their campus. - Essay Editing: After developing your essays' narratives, your coach will provide thorough editing and feedback, refining each draft until the essays are polished and ready for submission. Multiple rounds of edits ensure the final products are perfect. To summarize, this package pairs you with a world-class coach who will guide you through every step of creating standout college essays. They will offer honest and constructive feedback, ensuring your essays showcase your strengths and individuality.


What you'll get from this package

Compelling essays that are differentiated, personalized, and thoughtful — tailored to each school you decide to apply to

A deeper understanding of who you are, what impact you plan to have on the world, and why schools should care

An outline and several drafts of essays that get you closer to the final polished version that will stand out to admissions teams


Additional details

Coaching delivered via live sessions and .

Refund Policy

Additional expectations or terms of engagement may be provided by coaches (e.g. expected response times, etc.).

Services included:

Application Strategy

Essays

Editing


Sarah E.

Offered by Sarah E.

Joined December 2025

5.0

Authentic Narrative Coach | 15+ Years Experience | USC Admissions

Recent student acceptances include: Cornell, USC, UCLA, UC Berkeley, UC Irvine, UC San Diego, Northeastern, Boston University, UIUC, Chapman University, Loyola Marymount University, University of San Diego, Texas A&M, UT Austin, Rutgers University, and the University of Michigan Ann Arbor. After reviewing thousands of undergraduate applications during my 15 years in admissions, I learned that the strongest applications are rarely the ones with the longest extracurricular activity lists or the most polished essays. As a former Associate Director of Admission at the University of Southern California, I know admissions committees aren't looking for perfect students. They're looking for real students, those who have a genuine sense of who they are and can communicate how their experiences, values, interests, and dreams come together to tell a compelling, authentic story. That's the foundation of my work. I help students gain the clarity and confidence to make college decisions that align with their strengths, values, and long term goals, then translate that into an application that stands out. Whether you're struggling to find your authentic voice, choosing the right colleges, or applying to highly selective universities, I'll help you communicate not just what you've accomplished, but who you are and what you hope to contribute. That's what makes applications memorable. My work is especially valuable for students who: 🎓 Feel pressure to appear perfect and want the confidence to present their authentic selves. 🌱 Are navigating self doubt, unconventional paths, or significant decisions and want thoughtful, honest guidance throughout the admissions process. 📚 Have meaningful experiences but struggle to translate them into a clear, cohesive application that reflects their voice. 💛 Want a coach who sees them as a whole person, not just an applicant, and values their growth as much as their admissions outcomes. If you're looking for thoughtful, personalized guidance throughout the college admissions process, I'd be honored to help you create an application that reflects your strengths, your story, and your potential.

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40+ people coached for College

Starting at $1,068.75

5h+ of coaching