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MBA Essay & Narrative Development Package

MBA Essay & Narrative Development Package

Offered by Becky S.

5.0

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300+ M7 Admits | Wharton Ad. Fellow | Career Strategy Expert | US & Intl.

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Description

Strong MBA essays need to do more than answer the prompt. They must reveal judgment, self-awareness, leadership, motivation, and fit. The best essays are always specific enough to be memorable, strategic enough to support your application goals, and personal enough to feel authentic. This package is designed for applicants ready to elevate their MBA essays and tell their story in a way that truly resonates with admissions committees. Whether you’re starting from scratch or fine-tuning existing drafts, this package provides expert support to help you write essays that stand out. Activities in this package can include, but are not limited to: - Initial Kickoff & Planning Session: Begin with a deep dive into your background, goals, and experiences to lay the foundation for a strong, authentic narrative. - Application Strategy: Collaborate to define what makes you unique and how to strategically showcase your story across your essays. - Essay Brainstorming: Explore key experiences and themes to uncover compelling angles and identify the most powerful stories to tell. - Essay Crafting: Build clear, compelling, and well-structured essays that reflect your personal voice and align with what top programs are seeking. - Essay Editing: Refine and polish your drafts through multiple rounds of feedback to ensure clarity and impact.


What you'll get from this package

Detailed prompt interpretation and essay strategy, along with careful story selection and theme prioritization

Deep dive into who you are, what impact you plan to have on the world, and why business schools should care

Compelling essays that are differentiated, personalized, and thoughtful — tailored to each school you decide to apply to

Actionable comments on structure, logic, specificity, voice, and fit

Guidance on how essays should align with resume, goals, recommendations, and interviews


Additional details

Coaching delivered via live sessions and .

Refund Policy

Services included:

Application Strategy

Essays

Editing


Becky S.

Offered by Becky S.

Joined September 2024

5.0

300+ M7 Admits | Wharton Ad. Fellow | Career Strategy Expert | US & Intl.

I’m a Wharton MBA, former Wharton Admissions Fellow, and Founder of The Ivy Journey (theivyjourney.com/mba), where I’ve spent 15+ years helping ambitious applicants earn admission to top MBA programs. My clients have earned admits to HBS, Stanford GSB, Wharton, MIT Sloan, Columbia, Kellogg, Booth, Haas, Yale SOM, LBS, INSEAD, and other top US, UK & EU programs. I’m especially strong at helping applicants turn complex, nonlinear, or highly competitive backgrounds into clear, differentiated MBA stories. I’ve worked with candidates from consulting, banking/finance, tech, product, healthcare, entrepreneurship, family business, nonprofit, government, and international backgrounds, including many applicants navigating U.S. MBA admissions from Asian, European, and other global markets. My edge is the combination of admissions judgment and career strategy. As a former Wharton admissions fellow, I understand how admissions readers evaluate leadership, career logic, school fit, recommendations, interviews, and personal differentiation. As a career coach and former consultant/hiring manager, I also help clients build MBA narratives that make sense beyond admission: why this degree, why now, why this school, and why your goals are credible. I work best with applicants who want thoughtful, strategic, high-touch coaching. I’ll help you pressure-test your school list, sharpen your positioning, build a compelling resume, craft authentic essays that tell your unique story, prepare recommenders, and walk into interviews with clarity and confidence.

Coaches professionally

60+ people coached for MBA

Starting at $1,230.25

5h+ of coaching