Skip to main content

Final Application Secondary Review

Final Application Secondary Review

Offered by Becky S.

5.0

()

300+ M7 Admits | Wharton Ad. Fellow | Career Strategy Expert | US & Intl.

The Wharton School (UPenn) Logo

Admissions Committee at The Wharton School (UPenn)

The Ivy Journey Logo

Works at The Ivy Journey

Description

High speed, top quality, quick turnaround reviews of essays and other written application materials to help you optimize and finalize your M7 MBA applications before submission! Activities in this package include, but are not limited to: - Comprehensive Review: Assessment of full application—including essays, resume, and any other provided materials—to ensure consistency with your story and goals. - Detailed Feedback: Receive thoughtful, strategic feedback with specific, actionable suggestions to elevate your materials and strengthen your overall presentation. - Final Edits: Work with your coach to polish your written materials, ensuring they are clear, compelling, and aligned with your overall story. - Submission Confidence: Gain peace of mind knowing every piece of your application has been reviewed and optimized with expert guidance.


What you'll get from this package

Detailed feedback to help you optimize stories and examples for compelling essays

Tactical recommendations to improve writing style, logic, flow and clarity

Actionable suggestions for enhancement of key application documents including resume, activities list, etc.


Additional details

Coaching delivered via live sessions and .

Refund Policy

Services included:

Secondary Review


Becky S.

Offered by Becky S.

Joined September 2024

5.0

300+ M7 Admits | Wharton Ad. Fellow | Career Strategy Expert | US & Intl.

I’m a Wharton MBA, former Wharton Admissions Fellow, and Founder of The Ivy Journey (theivyjourney.com/mba), where I’ve spent 15+ years helping ambitious applicants earn admission to top MBA programs. My clients have earned admits to HBS, Stanford GSB, Wharton, MIT Sloan, Columbia, Kellogg, Booth, Haas, Yale SOM, LBS, INSEAD, and other top US, UK & EU programs. I’m especially strong at helping applicants turn complex, nonlinear, or highly competitive backgrounds into clear, differentiated MBA stories. I’ve worked with candidates from consulting, banking/finance, tech, product, healthcare, entrepreneurship, family business, nonprofit, government, and international backgrounds, including many applicants navigating U.S. MBA admissions from Asian, European, and other global markets. My edge is the combination of admissions judgment and career strategy. As a former Wharton admissions fellow, I understand how admissions readers evaluate leadership, career logic, school fit, recommendations, interviews, and personal differentiation. As a career coach and former consultant/hiring manager, I also help clients build MBA narratives that make sense beyond admission: why this degree, why now, why this school, and why your goals are credible. I work best with applicants who want thoughtful, strategic, high-touch coaching. I’ll help you pressure-test your school list, sharpen your positioning, build a compelling resume, craft authentic essays that tell your unique story, prepare recommenders, and walk into interviews with clarity and confidence.

Coaches professionally

60+ people coached for MBA

Starting at $1,230.25

5h+ of coaching