Write a Powerful Personal Statement

Write a Powerful Personal Statement

Offered by Shannon B.

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Former T14 Recruiting and Student Affairs Dean | First-Gen Advocate

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Studied at DePaul University

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Package Description:

Your personal statement is the narrative that ties together your whole law school application. With this package, get help from an experienced coach to craft a unique, personal, and compelling personal statement that will wow admissions committees. This package includes the following: 1. Initial Kickoff and Planning Session: Begin with an in-depth kickoff session with your coach to discuss your background, goals, experiences, and aspirations. This session sets the foundation for creating a powerful personal statement. 2. Personal Statement Brainstorming: Dive deep into your background and experiences with your coach to uncover themes, perspectives, and qualities that set you apart. Learn more about yourself and explore various narratives to make sure your personal statement captures your true essence. 3. Personal Statement Drafting: Work closely with your coach to draft your personal statement. Find a structure and style that highlight your motivations, experiences, and aspirations. 4. Personal Statement Editing: After developing your personal statement's narrative, your coach will provide multiple rounds of editing and feedback, refining each draft until the statement is polished and ready for submission. This package pairs you with a world-class coach who will help you create a winning personal statement. Ready to get started?


What you'll get from this package

A compelling personal statement that is differentiated, personalized, and thoughtful

A deeper understanding of your motivations, experiences, and aspirations, and how they align with your career goals

An outline and several drafts of your personal statement, refined through multiple rounds of feedback and edits

Confidence that your personal statement will stand out to law school admissions committees


Additional details

Coaching delivered via live sessions and .

Refund Policy

Additional expectations or terms of engagement may be provided by coaches (e.g. expected response times, etc.).

Services included:

Application Strategy

Essays


Shannon B.

Offered by Shannon B.

Joined July 2025

5.0

Former T14 Recruiting and Student Affairs Dean | First-Gen Advocate

Welcome to my profile! With over a decade of experience at top law schools like the University of Chicago and Northwestern Pritzker School of Law, I bring a wealth of knowledge in law school admissions and student affairs. As a former Associate Dean and Director of Diversity Education & Outreach, I have reviewed countless applications and led recruitment initiatives, particularly for first-generation and historically underrepresented students. My background as a first-generation professional allows me to understand the challenges applicants face and guide them through the process with tailored strategies, and students I have worked with have gone on to U of C, Pritzker, Georgetown, Cornell, Wash U, USC and other great law schools. Whether you're navigating the complexities of law school admissions, seeking to enhance your personal statement, wanting to strategize about a character and fitness issue, or deciding which law school would best allow you to thrive, I'm here to help you succeed. Let's connect and make your law school dreams a reality! **Please don't let the rates deter you. I encourage you to contact me if you have concerns about the affordability of coaching, as I am always happy to offer discounts or design custom packages for those with less financial resources.

Starting at $675

5h+ of coaching

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