Craft Powerful Admissions Essays

Craft Powerful Admissions Essays

Offered by Severin B.

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Durham and Cambridge Grad | Double 1st, Top 10% | College Admissions Expert

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Studied at University of Cambridge

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Package Description:

This package is designed for applicants who want to write compelling, authentic essays that elevate their Master’s program applications. Whether you're just starting to brainstorm or refining final drafts, this package provides expert guidance to help your story stand out. You’ll partner with a Leland coach to clarify your narrative, highlight your strengths, and shape essays that resonate with admissions committees. Common coaching activities in this package include, but are not limited to: - Kickoff & Planning: Discuss your background, goals, and experiences to lay the groundwork for essays that align with your personal and professional journey. - Application Strategy: Identify key strengths and differentiators to emphasize across your materials, creating a cohesive and standout application. - Essay Brainstorming: Explore themes and storylines with your coach to uncover authentic, impactful narratives. - Essay Development: Write and shape essays that clearly convey your fit for the program and reflect your unique voice and aspirations. - Essay Refinement: Receive detailed feedback and edits to polish your essays for clarity, cohesion, and confidence at submission. This package is ideal for applicants who want to craft essays that are powerful, purposeful, and fully aligned with their goals.


What you'll get from this package

Compelling essays that are differentiated, personalized, and thoughtful — tailored to each school you decide to apply to

A deeper understanding of who you are, what impact you plan to have on the world, and why different programs should care

An outline and several drafts of essays that get you closer to the final polished version that will stand out to admissions teams


Additional details

Coaching delivered via live sessions and .

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Editing

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Severin B.

Offered by Severin B.

Joined December 2025

5.0

Durham and Cambridge Grad | Double 1st, Top 10% | College Admissions Expert

I help students win places at leading UK universities through clear strategy and high-quality writing. I am a recent graduate of Durham University (Geography), finishing 4th in my year with a First Class (78), and I went on to complete a Master’s at the University of Cambridge, graduating 11th in my year with a Distinction (76). Because I have moved through the admissions system recently, my guidance is grounded in what selectors are looking for now, not legacy playbooks. I support applicants across the full process, including: Personal statements (structure, narrative, evidence, line-by-line editing); University selection (course fit, entry requirements, competitiveness, strategy); Admissions tests (study plans, question approach, timed practice); Interviews (prep frameworks, mock interviews, feedback, confidence under pressure). If you want a rigorous, modern approach and an application that reads credibly, I can help you build a submission that materially improves your odds.

$360 - $640

5h - 10h of coaching

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