Common App Essay Review + Free BYU Essay Review (2-4 hours)

Common App Essay Review + Free BYU Essay Review (2-4 hours)

Offered by Miriam M.

Columbia Grad & Princeton Ph.D. Candidate | Craft Winning College Apps

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Studied at Princeton University

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Package Description:

This package is designed for high school students wanting extra guidance and support for Common App AND BYU application essays. If you are comfortable drafting your application essays on your own but looking for an admissions application expert to review your essays--this is the package for you! Your essays will be reviewed for effectiveness in answering prompts, making sure your essays contain content unique to you that will convey meaning to admissions readers, and editing suggestions to give you the best shot at admissions. With this package, you'll receive a detailed review of one Common App essay of your choice (note: two of the Common App prompts are also included in the BYU application). You’re welcome to use this essay for other schools and adapt it as needed for BYU. You'll also get one full review of all of your BYU essays—completely free. Please note that this package is in compliance with BYU's application guidelines. BYU's application includes the following language: - "You may not use generative AI tools (like ChatGPT) as you compose your responses" - "You may not pay anyone to help you with your application." — Coaches have agreed to provide all BYU support 100% for FREE for students who work with them through this package. - "You may ask others to read and review your essays to ensure that you are answering the prompt clearly and effectively." — Your coach will provide free essay revisions in line with this guidance - "Although it is acceptable to have others review your essays prior to submission, the words and ideas must be your own." — Your coach will never write essays for you, but they will support you as you craft a winning essay that resonates with the admissions team. In summary, this package is in compliance with BYU's application guidance. We've helped thousands of students with their BYU and other college applications and are excited to support you as you pursue this important goal. We are also deeply grateful to our BYU experts who have offered to provide BYU coaching for free for their clients who work with them on other schools.


What you'll get from this package

Compelling essays that are differentiated, personalized, and thoughtful

Final essays that convey the values your dream schools are looking for

A clear timeline and plan to keep you on track


Additional details

Coaching delivered via live sessions and .

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Miriam M.

Offered by Miriam M.

Joined March 2026

Columbia Grad & Princeton Ph.D. Candidate | Craft Winning College Apps

Welcome to my profile! As a Columbia University graduate and current Ph.D. candidate at Princeton University, I bring a strong academic background and a passion for helping students navigate the college admissions process. My experience as a Research Assistant and Editorial Intern has honed my skills in research, writing, and editing, which are crucial for crafting compelling college applications. I have also served as Co-President of Columbia's trans affinity group, where I developed leadership and mentoring skills that I now use to guide students in presenting their unique stories. Whether you need assistance with personal statements, application strategy, or interview preparation, I'm here to help you succeed. Let's work together to make your college dreams a reality!

$765

2h–4h of coaching

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