Final Application Review

Final Application Review

Offered by Joan D.

5.0

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MBA Essay Architect: 90%+ Admit Rate & M7 / EU Program Special

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Studied at The Wharton School (UPenn)

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Works at Boehringer Ingelheim

Package Description:

This package is designed for applicants who are nearing the finish line and want to ensure their MBA applications are polished and ready for submission. You’ll work with a world-class coach to fine-tune every component of your application so you can apply with confidence. Common coaching activities in this package include, but are not limited to: - Comprehensive Review: Your coach will assess your full application—including essays, resume, and any supplemental materials—to ensure consistency with your story and goals. - Detailed Feedback: Receive thoughtful, strategic feedback with specific, actionable suggestions to elevate your materials and strengthen your overall presentation. - Final Edits: Work with your coach to polish your written materials, ensuring they are clear, compelling, and aligned with your overall story. - Submission Confidence: Gain peace of mind knowing every piece of your application has been reviewed and optimized with expert guidance. This package is designed to help you cross the finish line with confidence. Your coach will provide honest, constructive feedback and help you deliver a final product that reflects the very best version of your candidacy.


What you'll get from this package

Polished Essays and Resume: Your essays and resume will be expertly edited to highlight your strengths and narrative.

Final Application Alignment: Your entire application will be aligned to present a cohesive, compelling story to admissions.

Error-Free Submission: Coach edits will ensure your application is ready for confident submission.


Additional details

Coaching delivered via live sessions and .

Refund Policy

Additional expectations or terms of engagement may be provided by coaches (e.g. expected response times, etc.).

Services included:

Editing

Secondary Review


Joan D.

Offered by Joan D.

Joined February 2026

5.0

MBA Essay Architect: 90%+ Admit Rate & M7 / EU Program Special

For the past five years, I have dedicated myself to guiding MBA applicants to success, merging my rigorous background in strategy consulting with a part-time creative writer's passion for storytelling. My approach is not about templates or ghostwriting; it's about acting as a **"narrative architect"** to help you uncover and articulate your most authentic, compelling story. My Track Record: - Consistent Success: Over five years, I have coached 8-10 applicants per season, maintaining a 90%+ overall admissions rate. The 2024-2025 cycle achieved a 100% success rate (10 out of 10 admits). - School Expertise: My clients have gained admission to a wide range of top-tier programs, including M7, S16, and major European schools such as INSEAD, LBS, Bocconi, Oxford (Said), and HEC Paris. - Diverse Case Depth: I have a proven record of guiding 1-2 candidates per year to secure Deferred MBA offers from M7 schools, and successfully coaching 1-2 executives through the EMBA application process. I believe the most powerful application is built on your unique truth. My 1-on-1 coaching is designed to be a collaborative and transformative discovery process: 1. Deep-Dive Discovery: We start with structured sessions to excavate your core career drivers, pivotal leadership moments, and authentic personal highlights. 2. Strategic Positioning: I help you synthesize your experiences into a coherent, powerful narrative that aligns your past achievements with your future goals, making you an irresistible candidate for your target schools. 3. Authentic Story Crafting: This is where my creative writing skills come to the fore. I specialize in helping yourefine your voice, structure compelling essays, and present your story in a way that is both genuine and strategically impactful. We ensure every word reinforces your unique profile. 4. Holistic Application Polish: From resume refinement and recommendation letter strategy to interview preparation, we meticulously strengthen every component of your application to present a consistent and powerful picture. If you are looking for a coach who combines a data-driven, strategic approach with the art of authentic storytelling to unlock your full potential, let's connect. I am committed to providing the structure, insight, and support you need to submit an application you are proud of and achieve outstanding results. Ready to begin? Schedule an introductory call to discuss your profile and aspirations

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