Strategic MBA Resume and Essay Review Package (Two Rounds Each)

Strategic MBA Resume and Essay Review Package (Two Rounds Each)

Offered by Carin N.

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MBA Admission Expert | Chicago Booth MBA | 1000+ Essays Reviewed

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Package Description:

This package is designed for applicants who want expert, end-to-end feedback on the two most important written components of the MBA application: your resume and your essays. If you already have drafts and want clear, candid, admissions-focused critique, this package delivers a full, structured review of both elements. This package includes: ✓ Two full rounds of review for your resume AND your essays - Both rounds include recorded walkthroughs and detailed in-document edits. - Essay review covers all written components for one school: essays, short answers, and optional essays. ✓ Recorded asynchronous feedback - Line-by-line commentary on how admissions officers are likely to read and interpret your materials. - Clear guidance on messaging, structure, impact, and tone. ✓ In-document edits and suggestions - Resume: bullet rewriting, impact quantification, action verbs, clarity improvements, formatting refinement. - Essays: structure, storytelling, logic, prompt alignment, theme clarity, strength of examples. ✓ Final polish on the second round - Tightening word count - Strengthening flow - Removing redundancies - Ensuring clean, cohesive, admissions-ready written materials ✓ 72-hour turnaround per review (business days) ✓ Additional essay or resume rounds available - Optional at a discounted rate via private link This package is ideal for applicants who want their full written profile - story, impact, achievements, and clarity - strengthened before submission.


What you'll get from this package

Clear, candid feedback that reflects how an admissions officer will interpret your materials

Stronger, more focused essays that answer the prompt and tell your story with intention

A polished final draft (after round two) that is ready for submission

Confidence that your essays highlight your strengths and present you in the best possible light


Additional details

Coaching delivered via .

I deliver all reviews asynchronously using the same system I’ve used successfully with applicants for years: - Recorded video feedback: I walk through your essays on screen and explain exactly what’s working, what isn’t, and why. - In-document comments and edits: show you how to strengthen your structure, clarity, storytelling, and alignment with the prompt. This format mirrors how admissions officers review applications (you aren’t there to explain anything to them), and it enables more candid, detailed, and actionable feedback than real-time conversations can provide. You’ll receive guidance you can rewatch as often as needed — with no wasted time on intros or small talk.

Refund Policy

Services included:

Editing

Secondary Review

Essays

Resume


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Carin N.

Offered by Carin N.

Joined November 2025

5.0

MBA Admission Expert | Chicago Booth MBA | 1000+ Essays Reviewed

I take a practical, efficient, and straightforward approach to MBA admissions coaching. Since 2018, I’ve worked with hundreds of applicants across a wide range of backgrounds, reviewing over 400 resumes and close to a thousand essays. Seeing this many materials over the years has given me a clear sense of what strengthens an application - and what tends to hold candidates back. - How I Work - My process is built around asynchronous, recorded reviews - a format I’ve refined over the years because it consistently produces clearer, more candid, and more actionable feedback. You’ll receive a screen-recorded walkthrough where I go line by line through your essays or resume, explaining how an admissions reader is likely to interpret your materials and where adjustments will have the greatest impact. This approach has multiple advantages: 1. It mirrors the admissions reading experience. Ad-coms review your materials without additional context, so I do the same. You won’t have the opportunity to explain or add context during an application review so evaluating your materials as-is is the most accurate way to give you feedback on what is missing and how strengthen them. 2. It’s more efficient. You receive a recording you can rewatch as needed, which makes the process far more efficient than a live call. In a 20‑30 minute recording, I can cover the same amount of feedback that would easily take well over an hour in a live session since there’s no pausing for note‑taking or back‑and‑forth clarification. 3. More candor, less hesitation. Recorded reviews allow me to be fully straightforward about what’s working and what isn’t, without the natural softening that happens in live conversations. That means you get clearer, more direct guidance focused purely on strengthening your application—not on managing the emotions of the moment. 4. No scheduling friction. I’m based in Europe, and asynchronous feedback ensures a predictable turnaround without any time-zone challenges. It also allows for more focused, uninterrupted analysis I offer live calls as an add-on to packages, but most applicants find that recorded feedback is more detailed, more efficient, and easier to revisit as they revise. - What You Can Expect From Me - Direct, structured, actionable guidance focused on clarity, narrative strength, and alignment with what MBA programs tend to value. My goal is to help you present your experiences in a way that is easy to follow, authentic to you, and compelling to admissions committees. If you’re looking for thoughtful, candid, and experienced support with your application materials, drop me a note!

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