Feedback on SoP, Personal Statement, or CV

Feedback on SoP, Personal Statement, or CV

Offered by Ash C.

5.0

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Ex-Carnegie Mellon AdCom | 300+ Admits | 10yrs+ Reviewing Apps, CVs, & SoPs

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Admissions Committee at Carnegie Mellon University

Package Description:

Delivered asynchronously only. Get expert, line-by-line feedback on the materials that actually move the needle in competitive graduate admissions. I’ve reviewed hundreds of admissions essays and CVs, as part of an AdCom at CMU and in my previous roles in career services. I’ll help you sharpen your narrative, elevate your impact, and present a cohesive, compelling application - without the fluff. This ONLY includes essay and CV review. It does NOT include full transcript or upskill analysis.


What you'll get from this package

Feedback on your document(s) - checking for clarity, flow, grammar, and impact

Video summary reviewing document feedback


Additional details

Coaching delivered via .

Asynchronous only - comments made through Google Doc and video summary will summarize feedback

Refund Policy

Services included:

Editing

Essays

Resume


Ash C.

Offered by Ash C.

Joined June 2025

5.0

Ex-Carnegie Mellon AdCom | 300+ Admits | 10yrs+ Reviewing Apps, CVs, & SoPs

I served on the Admissions Committee at Carnegie Mellon for the MSCF Program (heavy in data science, ML, stats, math, and finance) as a representative from Career Services. As part of the committee, I evaluated hundreds of candidate materials - including CVs, application essays, video interviews, and conducted some interviews. By sitting on the committee, I also learned what faculty were looking for in coursework, academic rigor, and grades from candidates. In total, I've spent 10 years coaching Masters and PhD applicants (both those fresh from undergrad and those looking to pivot careers) research programs, prepare essays & CVs, connect with alumni & industry professionals, refine their portfolio, and upskill to prepare for admission into competitive programs. I'll help you understand the different programs' requirements and help you manage multiple applications in one cycle - while ensuring you're aligning your interests, materials, and skills with programs that will get you closer to your career goals. My approach is direct, adaptable, supportive, plus Autistic- and ADHD-friendly: mitigating anxiety and minimizing the overwhelm that comes with navigating graduate admissions on top of the rest of your life. You can check out some articles I've written for incoming grad students on QuantNet and my LinkedIn: https://www.linkedin.com/in/acrosscareers

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