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Make It Land — refine your draft so it has impact

Make It Land — refine your draft so it has impact

Offered by JJ v.

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Make Your Ideas Impossible to Ignore | Oxford MBA | Ex-Consultant

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Studied at Said Business School (Oxford)

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Worked at Visual Meaning

Description

Got a draft that isn't landing? Maybe you know it's not quite right, or you just sense your ideas aren't coming across the way you mean them. This is a focused session to refine it with you — in the room — until it says what you actually intend. Ahead of our session you send me the piece — a deck, a document, an essay, a webpage — and I review it to understand what you're reaching for. Then we reshape it together: structure, story, clarity and impact, worked through live. You'll leave with a piece reshaped to say what you mean, and a clear read on why it wasn't landing before. One expert pass, done together.


What you'll get from this package

A clear read on how your piece can better achieve your outcomes

A piece reshaped with you so it says what you mean

Sharper structure, story, clarity and impact you can feel


Additional details

Coaching delivered via live sessions and .

Here's how we'll work: • We start by scoping — a short intake or our intro call — so I understand what you're making, who it's for, the outcome you want, and your deadline. • Where there's an artifact, you share it ahead so I arrive prepared and we spend our time together on the work, not the setup. • Sessions are live and between sessions I perform reviews and you work on iterations and refinements. • Everything we discuss is treated as confidential, both ways.

Refund Policy

A few working assumptions: • Quoted time covers live sessions plus supporting work (reviewing materials, reading context, writing summaries). • Book sessions at least 3 business days ahead, subject to mutual availability. • Give 24 hours' notice to cancel or move; short-notice cancellations, missed sessions or late starts are charged in full. • Sizing for one review/build unit: deck ≤ ~15 slides; document/essay ≤ ~2,500 words; website ≤ ~5 pages or one flow. Bigger or multi-artifact pieces should be scoped separately. • This isn't therapy, counselling, or medical, psychological, legal or financial advice, or a substitute for any of them. • It's collaborative: how far your piece goes depends on the work you put in between sessions.

Services included:

Presentation Skills

Nonverbal Communication

Effective Communication

Persuasion and Influence

Active Listening


JJ v.

Offered by JJ v.

Joined January 2026

5.0

Make Your Ideas Impossible to Ignore | Oxford MBA | Ex-Consultant

I help people turn complex ideas into communication that lands - pitches, talks, presentations, documents, essays and website narratives. I competed nationally in debating and have coached public speaking since 2015; for six years as a management consultant at Visual Meaning (an Oxford strategy, visual design and data consultancy), I made some of the most complex organisational problems clear enough to act on. Whether you need a fast, honest review or a thinking partner to build something from scratch, I help you land your message and move your audience. Schedule a free intro call with me and we can scope something specific for you.

Experience level: Manager

10+ people coached for Communication & Public Speaking

$360

2h of coaching