Write a Powerful Personal Statement

Write a Powerful Personal Statement

Offered by Jim H.

Yale Law School, Bain & Co., Yale College Alum | Admissions Expert

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Studied at Yale Law School

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Package Description:

Your personal statement is the narrative that ties together your whole law school application. With this package, get help from an experienced coach to craft a unique, personal, and compelling personal statement that will wow admissions committees. This package includes the following: 1. Initial Kickoff and Planning Session: Begin with an in-depth kickoff session with your coach to discuss your background, goals, experiences, and aspirations. This session sets the foundation for creating a powerful personal statement. 2. Personal Statement Brainstorming: Dive deep into your background and experiences with your coach to uncover themes, perspectives, and qualities that set you apart. Learn more about yourself and explore various narratives to make sure your personal statement captures your true essence. 3. Personal Statement Drafting: Work closely with your coach to draft your personal statement. Find a structure and style that highlight your motivations, experiences, and aspirations. 4. Personal Statement Editing: After developing your personal statement's narrative, your coach will provide multiple rounds of editing and feedback, refining each draft until the statement is polished and ready for submission. This package pairs you with a world-class coach who will help you create a winning personal statement. Ready to get started?


What you'll get from this package

A compelling personal statement that is differentiated, personalized, and thoughtful

A deeper understanding of your motivations, experiences, and aspirations, and how they align with your career goals

An outline and several drafts of your personal statement, refined through multiple rounds of feedback and edits

Confidence that your personal statement will stand out to law school admissions committees


Additional details

Coaching delivered via live sessions and .

Refund Policy

Additional expectations or terms of engagement may be provided by coaches (e.g. expected response times, etc.).

Services included:

Application Strategy

Essays


Jim H.

Offered by Jim H.

Joined May 2025

Yale Law School, Bain & Co., Yale College Alum | Admissions Expert

I am a Yale Law School, Bain & Co., and Yale College alum who is passionate about helping applicants tell their stories. As someone who navigated the nuances of competitive admissions alone, I understand the frustration of feeling overwhelmed by forum posts, wondering what to make of conflicting information, and puzzling over how generic advice applied to my unique situation. And as someone who has been on the other side reviewing resumes and interviewing candidates, I also understand what stands out (and what doesn't). I became an admissions coach to help students overcome application-season anxiety and to develop confidence in the decisions they make on their application. I want to help you, too. Reach out to find out more.

Starting at $380

5h+ of coaching

 
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