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Write Powerful College Essays

Write Powerful College Essays

Offered by James F.

5.0

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UC Berkeley Haas MBA | Adobe Firefly PM | Expert in Tech Internships

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Studied at Brigham Young University

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Worked at Microsoft

Description

This package is designed for college applicants aiming to craft exceptional essays that maximize their chances of admission. This package includes the following, but feel free to adapt based on your unique situation and goals: - Initial Kickoff and Planning Session: Begin with an in-depth kickoff session with your coach to discuss your background, goals, experiences, and aspirations. This session sets the stage for creating compelling college essays. - Application Strategy: Collaborate with your coach to identify your unique points of differentiation as an applicant and strategize the best ways to highlight these in your essays. - Essay Brainstorming: Dive deep into your background and experiences with your coach to uncover themes, perspectives, and qualities that set you apart. Together, you’ll explore various narratives to ensure your essays capture your true essence. - Essay Crafting: Work with your coach to craft powerful narratives rooted in your unique story that help the admissions committee understand why you would be a valuable addition to their campus. - Essay Editing: After developing your essays' narratives, your coach will provide thorough editing and feedback, refining each draft until the essays are polished and ready for submission. Multiple rounds of edits ensure the final products are perfect. To summarize, this package pairs you with a world-class coach who will guide you through every step of creating standout college essays. They will offer honest and constructive feedback, ensuring your essays showcase your strengths and individuality.


What you'll get from this package

Compelling essays that are differentiated, personalized, and thoughtful — tailored to each school you decide to apply to

A deeper understanding of who you are, what impact you plan to have on the world, and why schools should care

An outline and several drafts of essays that get you closer to the final polished version that will stand out to admissions teams


Additional details

Coaching delivered via live sessions and .

Refund Policy

Additional expectations or terms of engagement may be provided by coaches (e.g. expected response times, etc.).

Services included:

Application Strategy

Essays

Editing


James F.

Offered by James F.

Joined September 2024

5.0

UC Berkeley Haas MBA | Adobe Firefly PM | Expert in Tech Internships

I can help with: 🎓 MBA application strategy and school selection ✍️ essays that tell a compelling, authentic story 📄 resumes that stand out to admissions committees 💼 positioning your professional experience for maximum impact 💬 interview preparation for top MBA programs 📈 building a competitive application from start to finish --- Getting into a top MBA program isn't just about strong credentials—it's about crafting a compelling story that demonstrates leadership, impact, and future potential. I was admitted to the UC Berkeley Haas MBA program and Carnegie Mellon Tepper MBA program, and I graduated from Brigham Young University with a 3.9 GPA in Strategic Management after being selected for BYU's highly competitive Product Management emphasis program. Today, I work at Adobe, where I build Generative AI products used by enterprise customers, following previous Product Management roles at Microsoft, Qualtrics, and Global Payments. Working at the forefront of AI has given me firsthand experience leading innovative products, collaborating with executives and engineering teams, and solving complex business problems—experiences that admissions committees value and that I can help you effectively communicate in your application. I specialize in helping applicants transform their professional experiences into compelling resumes, essays, and interview stories that highlight leadership, measurable impact, and long-term career vision. Whether you're applying to a top MBA program, pursuing scholarships, or transitioning into a new career through business school, I'll help you build an authentic application that stands out for all the right reasons.

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Starting at $945.25

5h+ of coaching