Write Powerful College Essays

Write Powerful College Essays

Offered by Ethan B.

5.0

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62 Successful Transfers to Top Schools | Founder of Bridge2Transfer

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Studied at University of California, Berkeley

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Works at Bridge2Transfer

Package Description:

This package is designed for college applicants aiming to craft exceptional essays that maximize their chances of admission. This package includes the following, but feel free to adapt based on your unique situation and goals: - Initial Kickoff and Planning Session: Begin with an in-depth kickoff session with your coach to discuss your background, goals, experiences, and aspirations. This session sets the stage for creating compelling college essays. - Application Strategy: Collaborate with your coach to identify your unique points of differentiation as an applicant and strategize the best ways to highlight these in your essays. - Essay Brainstorming: Dive deep into your background and experiences with your coach to uncover themes, perspectives, and qualities that set you apart. Together, you’ll explore various narratives to ensure your essays capture your true essence. - Essay Crafting: Work with your coach to craft powerful narratives rooted in your unique story that help the admissions committee understand why you would be a valuable addition to their campus. - Essay Editing: After developing your essays' narratives, your coach will provide thorough editing and feedback, refining each draft until the essays are polished and ready for submission. Multiple rounds of edits ensure the final products are perfect. To summarize, this package pairs you with a world-class coach who will guide you through every step of creating standout college essays. They will offer honest and constructive feedback, ensuring your essays showcase your strengths and individuality.


What you'll get from this package

Compelling essays that are differentiated, personalized, and thoughtful — tailored to each school you decide to apply to

A deeper understanding of who you are, what impact you plan to have on the world, and why schools should care

An outline and several drafts of essays that get you closer to the final polished version that will stand out to admissions teams


Additional details

Coaching delivered via live sessions and .

Refund Policy

Additional expectations or terms of engagement may be provided by coaches (e.g. expected response times, etc.).

Services included:

Editing

Application Strategy

Essays


Ethan B.

Offered by Ethan B.

Joined March 2025

5.0

62 Successful Transfers to Top Schools | Founder of Bridge2Transfer

Welcome to my profile! As the founder of Bridge2Transfer, I am dedicated to empowering community college students to navigate the transfer process with confidence and success. With a background in Political Science and Data Science from UC Berkeley and extensive experience in student mentorship and academic advising, I have developed a deep expertise in college admissions. I personally gained admission to 12 out of the 14 Top 20 universities I applied to—including Stanford, Vanderbilt, UC Berkeley, UCLA, and more—giving me firsthand insight into what it takes to craft a competitive application. Through my work as a transfer mentor and developing a platform to reach many students, I have successfully guided 62 (and counting) students in developing compelling applications, refining personal statements, and securing admission to top universities. My approach goes beyond just getting students admitted—I focus on equipping them with the tools, strategies, and confidence to excel at their dream schools. Whether you need personalized essay coaching, strategic application guidance, or interview preparation, I’m here to help you put your best foot forward. Let’s turn your college aspirations into reality!

60+ people coached for College

Starting at $327

5h+ of coaching

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