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Graduate School Personal Statement Review Package

Graduate School Personal Statement Review Package

Offered by Liz C.

5.0

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College Essay Expert | Brigham Young University (BYU) Coach

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Studied at Duke's Fuqua School of Business

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Works at Veterans Affairs

Description

A focused coaching package for graduate school applicants who need help developing a strong, authentic personal statement or statement of purpose. This package includes an initial strategy conversation, story development, prompt analysis, review of the applicant’s goals and background, draft feedback, editing, and final review. The goal is to help the applicant clearly communicate their motivation, preparation, relevant experience, academic or professional direction, and fit for the program.


What you'll get from this package

A clear personal statement theme

A stronger essay structure

Specific feedback on content and organization

Edited draft revisions

A more compelling explanation of their experience and goals

A final reviewed statement ready for applicant approval


Additional details

Coaching delivered via live sessions and .

Refund Policy

Services included:

Secondary Review

Application Strategy

Essays

Editing


Liz C.

Offered by Liz C.

Joined September 2024

5.0

College Essay Expert | Brigham Young University (BYU) Coach

I’ve helped dozens of applicants strengthen their BYU applications, with an exceptionally strong record of admissions success. I especially enjoy working with high school students, active missionaries, returned missionaries, and applicants whose strengths may not be obvious on paper. As a BYU alum, published author, graduate of Duke’s top-10 MBA program, and former admit to BYU’s highly selective nursing program, I bring a strategic eye to the application process. In my innovation work at the VA, I teach and coach storytelling and pitching, helping people communicate their ideas, experiences, and impact to different audiences. I bring that same approach to application coaching, helping applicants connect the dots across their experiences, clarify their strengths and goals, and communicate their story in a way that feels authentic, focused, and compelling. I also bring a strong healthcare perspective through my nursing background and MBA in healthcare management, and I enjoy helping future nurses, physicians, researchers, and other healthcare professionals explain their motivation, highlight relevant experiences, and present themselves with confidence. Because this work is highly personalized, I intentionally work with only a small number of applicants each application season. This allows me to give each student careful attention, thoughtful strategy, and meaningful feedback throughout the application process.

Coaches professionally

20+ people coached for College

$500

4h of coaching