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College Essay Review: UVU + Free BYU

College Essay Review: UVU + Free BYU

Offered by Liz C.

5.0

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College Essay Expert | Brigham Young University (BYU) Coach

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Studied at Duke's Fuqua School of Business

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Works at Veterans Affairs

Description

A focused package for applicants who have already drafted their essays and want thoughtful review, editing, and revision support before submission. This package is designed to strengthen clarity, structure, tone, authenticity, and overall impact while preserving the applicant’s own voice. Includes an initial meeting to discuss the applicant’s goals, application context, and essay direction, followed by review of the submitted drafts and two rounds of edits per essay.


What you'll get from this package

A stronger, more polished set of essays

Specific feedback on clarity, structure, tone, and impact

Edits that preserve the applicant’s own voice

Improved organization and flow within each essay

Stronger alignment between essays and application goals

Two rounds of revisions per essay

Final reviewed essays ready for applicant approval


Additional details

Coaching delivered via live sessions and .

Refund Policy

Services included:

Secondary Review

Application Strategy


Liz C.

Offered by Liz C.

Joined September 2024

5.0

College Essay Expert | Brigham Young University (BYU) Coach

I’ve helped dozens of applicants strengthen their BYU applications, with an exceptionally strong record of admissions success. I especially enjoy working with high school students, active missionaries, returned missionaries, and applicants whose strengths may not be obvious on paper. As a BYU alum, published author, graduate of Duke’s top-10 MBA program, and former admit to BYU’s highly selective nursing program, I bring a strategic eye to the application process. In my innovation work at the VA, I teach and coach storytelling and pitching, helping people communicate their ideas, experiences, and impact to different audiences. I bring that same approach to application coaching, helping applicants connect the dots across their experiences, clarify their strengths and goals, and communicate their story in a way that feels authentic, focused, and compelling. I also bring a strong healthcare perspective through my nursing background and MBA in healthcare management, and I enjoy helping future nurses, physicians, researchers, and other healthcare professionals explain their motivation, highlight relevant experiences, and present themselves with confidence. Because this work is highly personalized, I intentionally work with only a small number of applicants each application season. This allows me to give each student careful attention, thoughtful strategy, and meaningful feedback throughout the application process.

Coaches professionally

20+ people coached for College

Starting at $2,000

12h+ of coaching