Asynchronous MBA Resume and Essay Review and Edits

Asynchronous MBA Resume and Essay Review and Edits

Offered by Bri M.

Is your story clear, compelling, & truly yours? | M7 | Non-trad, Gov't Apps

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Studied at Harvard Kennedy School

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Worked at Deloitte

Package Description:

This package is designed for MBA applicants who want focused, high-quality feedback on their resume and essays without a full coaching engagement. It is best suited for applicants who are confident in their overall story and are looking to refine how it comes across on the page. You will receive structured, written feedback across two rounds of edits, followed by a final polish. I focus on clarity, positioning, and precision, helping you strengthen how your leadership, impact, and career goals are communicated in your materials. My approach goes beyond line edits. I evaluate how your resume and essays work together, where your narrative lacks clarity or specificity, and where you can better differentiate yourself. You will receive direct, actionable feedback that you can implement quickly. This package is ideal for applicants who already have drafts and want to refine them to a high standard before submission.


What you'll get from this package

✍️ Two full rounds of written edits and comments on your MBA resume and essays

🧾 In-line feedback focused on clarity, structure, and positioning

🎯 Targeted suggestions to strengthen your leadership narrative and differentiation

🔍 Identification of gaps, inconsistencies, or weak points across materials

🧠 Guidance on how to revise effectively between rounds

✅ A final polish pass to refine language, flow, and overall quality before submission


Additional details

Coaching delivered via live sessions.

Refund Policy

I will provide comprehensive offline comments within 48 hours of your submission of drafts.

Services included:

Essays

Resume

Editing


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Bri M.

Offered by Bri M.

Joined July 2025

Is your story clear, compelling, & truly yours? | M7 | Non-trad, Gov't Apps

As a Harvard and MIT admit, I’ve seen that applicants who get in aren’t always the most “impressive” on paper. They’re the ones who know how to make sense of their experiences (even if they feel average!) and communicate a clear, compelling story that only they could tell. I help applicants do exactly that across essays, resumes, and interviews, especially for those from less traditional MBA paths, including government, public sector, and other mission-driven backgrounds. I believe access to these opportunities should not come down to having the “right” background, but to how well you understand and connect the experiences you already have. If you are looking to tell a story that feels both authentic and distinct, I would love to help you on your journey.

10+ people coached for MBA

$399

5h–8h of coaching

 
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