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Master's Program Essay & Narrative Development Package

Master's Program Essay & Narrative Development Package

Offered by Becky S.

5.0

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250+ Top Admits | Wharton MBA | Expert for Business, STEM & Policy Programs

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Description

Strong personal statements and school specific essays need to do more than answer the prompt. They must reveal judgment, self-awareness, leadership, motivation, and fit. The best essays are always specific enough to be memorable, strategic enough to support your application goals, and personal enough to feel authentic. This package is designed for applicants ready to elevate their graduate school application essays and tell their story in a way that truly resonates with admissions committees. Whether you’re starting from scratch or fine-tuning existing drafts, this package provides expert support to help you write essays that stand out. Activities in this package can include, but are not limited to: - Kickoff & Planning: Discuss your background, goals, and experiences to lay the groundwork for essays that align with your personal and professional journey. - Application Strategy: Identify key strengths and differentiators to emphasize across your materials, creating a cohesive and standout application. - Essay Brainstorming: Explore themes and storylines to uncover authentic, impactful narratives. - Essay Development: Write and shape essays that clearly convey your fit for the program and reflect your unique voice and aspirations. - Essay Refinement: Receive detailed feedback and edits to polish your essays for clarity, cohesion, and confidence at submission.


What you'll get from this package

Detailed prompt interpretation and essay strategy, along with careful story selection and theme prioritization

Deep dive into who you are, what impact you plan to have on the world, and why schools should care

Compelling essays that are differentiated, personalized, and thoughtful — tailored to each school you decide to apply to

Actionable comments on structure, logic, specificity, voice, and fit

Guidance on how essays should align with resume, goals, recommendations, and interviews


Additional details

Coaching delivered via live sessions and .

Refund Policy

Services included:

Application Strategy

Essays

Editing


Becky S.

Offered by Becky S.

Joined September 2024

5.0

250+ Top Admits | Wharton MBA | Expert for Business, STEM & Policy Programs

Hi, I’m Becky Song, Founder & Executive Director of Ivy Journey, Wharton MBA, former Wharton admissions fellow, and admissions coach with 15+ years of experience helping applicants earn admission to top graduate programs. For master’s applicants, my specialty is helping strong candidates turn their academic, professional, and personal background into a clear, differentiated admissions strategy. I’m especially strong with applicants targeting MS, MiM, MSBA, MFin, policy, management, analytics, engineering/STEM-adjacent, and career-pivot programs where schools need to see not only strong credentials, but also a compelling reason for why this degree, why this program, why now, and why you. My clients have earned admission to top programs and universities including Harvard, Princeton, Yale, Stanford, UPenn/Wharton, MIT, Columbia, Yale, Duke, Johns Hopkins, UC Berkeley, UCLA, NYU, Vanderbilt, and more. I also bring firsthand career strategy experience from management consulting, pharmaceutical/life sciences, research, entrepreneurship, government & nonprofits, which allows me to help applicants connect their graduate school goals to a credible long-term career story. I can help you with school selection, application strategy, personal statements/statements of purpose, resumes, recommendation strategy, scholarship positioning, interviews, waitlist strategy, and final application reviews. My approach is strategic, direct, and deeply personalized: we’ll identify your strongest admissions angle, sharpen your positioning, and make every part of your application reinforce a cohesive, memorable case for admission.

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100+ people coached for Master’s Programs

Starting at $1,230.25

5h+ of coaching