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Description
Top quality, quick turnaround reviews of essays and other written application materials to help you optimize and finalize your college applications. Activities in this package include, but are not limited to: - Comprehensive Review: Assessment of full common application—including essays, activity list, and any other provided materials—to ensure consistency with your story and goals. - Detailed Feedback: Receive thoughtful, strategic feedback with specific, actionable suggestions to elevate your materials and strengthen your overall presentation. - Final Edits: Polish your written materials, ensuring they are clear, compelling, and aligned with your overall story. - Submission Confidence: Gain peace of mind knowing every piece of your application has been reviewed and optimized with expert guidance.
What you'll get from this package
Detailed feedback to help you optimize stories and examples for compelling essays
Tactical recommendations to improve writing style, logic, flow and clarity
Suggestions for enhancement of key application documents including personal statement, activities list, etc.
Additional details
Coaching delivered via live sessions and .
Services included:
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Offered by Becky S.
Joined September 2024
5.0
350+ Ivy/Top 30 Admits | $2.5M+ Scholarships | Professional Coach w/ 15 YOE
I’m Becky Song, Founder & Executive Director of The Ivy Journey and a premium college admissions strategist with 15+ years of experience helping students build standout applications for Ivy League, Top 30, UC, and other highly selective universities. My students have earned admission to Harvard, Yale, Princeton, Stanford, Columbia, MIT, Penn/Wharton, UC Berkeley, UCLA, Duke, Vanderbilt, Johns Hopkins, Carnegie Mellon, NYU, Michigan, Cornell, and more. I specialize in helping ambitious students move beyond a generic “high-achieving applicant” profile and develop a clear admissions strategy, memorable personal narrative, polished essays, and a school list that fits both their goals and competitive positioning. My approach combines admissions insight, strategic consulting, and deep narrative coaching. I help students identify what makes them distinctive, translate their academic and extracurricular experiences into a cohesive story, and present themselves with clarity, maturity, and authenticity across all elements of their application. I’m especially strong with students targeting Ivy+/Top 30 schools, business or entrepreneurship programs, STEM/business crossover profiles, undecided high-achievers, international students, students who need stronger differentiation, and families who want a structured, high-touch process. If you want a coach who can help you think strategically, write powerfully, and build an application that feels both authentic and competitive, I’d love to work with you.
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