MBA Personal Statement/Essay Round-by-Round Review

MBA Personal Statement/Essay Round-by-Round Review

Offered by Ashish D.

5.0

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Current Wharton JD/MBA | McKinsey SBA

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Studied at The Wharton School (UPenn)

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Works at McKinsey & Company

Package Description:

Your personal statement is the narrative that ties together your whole law school application. With this package, get help from an experienced coach to craft a unique, personal, and compelling personal statement that will wow admissions committees. This package includes the following: 1. 45 Minute Initial Kickoff and Planning Session (required): begin with an in-depth kickoff session to discuss your background, goals, experiences, and aspirations. This session gives me background on your story and sets the foundation for creating a powerful personal statement. 2. Round-by-Round Engagement (1 minimum, additional as desired): depending on where you are in the drafting process (e.g., starting from scratch vs starting from a rough draft), I will provide the next round of edits/feedback to get you to your desired level. Support can range from targeted edits to broad thematical feedback/recommendations to help your essay progress and will differ based on essay maturity (e.g., for essays at brainstorming stage, feedback may consist of broad ideas to consider, pros/cons of each option, and broad outlines for each option; for essays at maturity, feedback may consist of targeted language and structural improvements).


What you'll get from this package

Meaningful progress towards the next level of your statement/essay from someone who recently went through the process


Additional details

Coaching delivered via live sessions and .

Refund Policy

Services included:

Editing

Essays

Supplementary Materials


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Ashish D.

Offered by Ashish D.

Joined August 2025

5.0

Current Wharton JD/MBA | McKinsey SBA

Welcome! I am earning an MBA from The Wharton School and a JD from the University of Pennsylvania Law School and earned acceptances to many top law and business programs. Coupled with my experience coaching candidates for consulting recruiting (I worked at McKinsey & Company before graduate school), and I am able to provide insight to aspiring MBA students on the admissions process. I enjoy helping clients craft compelling applications that highlight their strengths and unique stories. Whether you need assistance with application strategy, essay writing, or interview preparation, I'm here to help you succeed. Let's connect! Here is why you should work with me: ✅Admitted to multiple top 10 law and business programs ✅Earned full-ride merit scholarship for undergraduate studies ✅Relatively recent experience with application process

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2h 15m - 5h 15m of coaching

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