Essay Shortening: Keeping your energy with fewer words

Essay Shortening: Keeping your energy with fewer words

Offered by Ariel S.

5.0

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Stanford Law JD | Expertise in building your application story

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Studied at Stanford Law School

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Works at Southern Poverty Law Center

Package Description:

This includes 1 hour spent shortening your essay, followed by one hour of discussion to ensure those edits fit with your vision of your essay. I review personal statements, diversity statements, school-specific essays, and "Why Law" essays.


What you'll get from this package

A shortened essay that fits within your page and/or word limits

An understanding of how to shorten your essay


Additional details

Coaching delivered via live sessions and .

I want to make sure that when I edit, it still fits your goals. You'll send me the current version of your essay(s), and I'll send back edits in redline alongside a clean copy. Then, we'll set up a time to discuss the changes, what make sense to you and what doesn't, to develop a final version.

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Services included:

Application Strategy

Essays

Resume


Ariel S.

Offered by Ariel S.

Joined March 2025

5.0

Stanford Law JD | Expertise in building your application story

I love the storytelling of admissions essays. My specialty is working on the law school essays, ranging from short optional essays, to diversity statements, to the personal statement. Having worked as a legal assistant, a resident assistant, and as president of a law school organization, I believe in the value of public service, and in sharing my knowledge with you. Whether you have a full essay draft that needs a final read, or a rough idea for a story and a feeling, I cater my strategy to you. I start with understanding your goals and emotions, to help you tell the story you want to tell about your journey to law school. I have experience in legal advocacy and working with legal clients from a wide range of backgrounds, and am comfortable meeting you where you are. I see myself as helping you to grow your creativity in the essay writing process, trimming areas that may trip you up, and coming out with an incredible bouquet of essays. Whatever your story, I'm here to work with you to achieve your law school dreams.

10+ people coached for Law School

Starting at $176.40

2h+ of coaching

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