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Package Description:
This package is designed for high school students wanting extra guidance and support for Common App AND BYU application essays. If you are comfortable drafting your application essays on your own but looking for an admissions application expert to review your essays--this is the package for you! Your essays will be reviewed for effectiveness in answering prompts, making sure your essays contain content unique to you that will convey meaning to admissions readers, and editing suggestions to give you the best shot at admissions. With this package, you'll receive a detailed review of one Common App essay of your choice (note: two of the Common App prompts are also included in the BYU application). You’re welcome to use this essay for other schools and adapt it as needed for BYU. You'll also get one full review of all of your BYU essays—completely free. Please note that this package is in compliance with BYU's application guidelines. BYU's application includes the following language: - "You may not use generative AI tools (like ChatGPT) as you compose your responses" - "You may not pay anyone to help you with your application." — Coaches have agreed to provide all BYU support 100% for FREE for students who work with them through this package. - "You may ask others to read and review your essays to ensure that you are answering the prompt clearly and effectively." — Your coach will provide free essay revisions in line with this guidance - "Although it is acceptable to have others review your essays prior to submission, the words and ideas must be your own." — Your coach will never write essays for you, but they will support you as you craft a winning essay that resonates with the admissions team. In summary, this package is in compliance with BYU's application guidance. We've helped thousands of students with their BYU and other college applications and are excited to support you as you pursue this important goal. We are also deeply grateful to our BYU experts who have offered to provide BYU coaching for free for their clients who work with them on other schools.
What you'll get from this package
Compelling essays that are differentiated, personalized, and thoughtful
Final essays that convey the values your dream schools are looking for
A clear timeline and plan to keep you on track
Additional details
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Telling your story, your way | Stanford Law, UChicago Alum
Like most people working on college admissions, I don't have family that went to Ivy+ schools. I pulled together information from my school career office, from friends and coworkers, and, of course, from Reddit. The process felt intimidating and secretive, and the difficulty of the process increased my anxiety as I waited for results. This is why I coach. The college application process is overwhelming, and no one should feel like they have to figure it out on their own. My goal is to simplify and illuminate the admissions process, and to give you the tools and confidence you need to present your best self. My path has been focused on public interest, but my coaching is about your dream, whether that's big law, policy, academia, or beyond. Together we'll address your goals and your fears to tell your story honestly and authentically. As a Stanford Law student with a strong foundation in Political Science from the University of Chicago, I bring a wealth of experience in advocacy and social justice to my coaching. My journey includes impactful internships at renowned organizations like the Southern Poverty Law Center and Earthjustice. I am passionate about helping students navigate the admissions process and rely on my past leadership experiences to help you with your goals. Whether you're crafting your essays selecting the right extracurriculars, I'm here to guide you every step of the way. Let's work together to make your dreams a reality.
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