Write a Powerful Personal Statement

Write a Powerful Personal Statement

Offered by Vongaishe M.

4.7

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Current Columbia University Ph.D. student perfect for aspiring Ph.Ds

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Studied at Columbia University

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Package Description:

This package is designed for aspiring PhD candidates who want to craft a compelling and standout personal statement, maximizing their chances of acceptance. This package includes the following, but feel free to adapt based on your unique situation and goals: - Initial kickoff and planning session: Begin with an in-depth session to discuss your academic background, research interests, and goals. Your coach will help you create a roadmap for writing a standout personal statement. - Personal statement brainstorming: Work closely with your coach to uncover key themes, experiences, and research passions. Together, you'll identify what makes your candidacy unique and how to showcase it effectively. - Personal statement drafting: Collaborate with your coach to draft a strong and authentic personal statement, focusing on effectively aligning your narrative with the priorities of your target programs. - Personal statement editing: Refine your personal statement through multiple rounds of feedback from your coach. They will help you polish the structure, tone, and content to ensure it resonates with admissions committees. - Final review: Your coach will complete a thorough review of your personal statement, ensuring it is submission-ready and highlights your academic potential. To summarize, this package pairs you with a world-class coach who will guide you through every step of creating a standout personal statement. They will provide honest and constructive feedback, helping to ensure your personal statement reflects your strengths, motivations, and aspirations.


What you'll get from this package

A compelling personal statement that is differentiated, personalized, and thoughtful

An outline and several drafts of your personal statement, refined through multiple rounds of feedback and edits

A polished final personal statement that you can feel proud of submitting and sharing with the admissions team


Additional details

Coaching delivered via live sessions and .

Refund Policy

Additional expectations or terms of engagement may be provided by coaches (e.g. expected response times, etc.).

Services included:

Editing

Essays


Vongaishe M.

Offered by Vongaishe M.

Joined October 2025

4.7

Current Columbia University Ph.D. student perfect for aspiring Ph.Ds

Welcome to my profile! As a current PhD candidate in Mechanical Engineering at Columbia University, I bring a deep understanding of the academic journey and the challenges faced by aspiring doctoral students. My experience as a ROOTS Mentor with Black Ivy has equipped me with the skills to guide high school students through the undergraduate application process, providing personalized advice and feedback. Additionally, my research experience at Stanford University, where I worked on cutting-edge technology in solar cell efficiency, has honed my ability to tackle complex problems and innovate solutions. I am passionate about helping others navigate their academic paths and achieve their goals. If you're looking for guidance on your PhD applications or research endeavors, feel free to reach out!

Starting at $332.50

5h+ of coaching

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