Common App Essay Review + Free BYU Essay Review (2-4 hours)

Common App Essay Review + Free BYU Essay Review (2-4 hours)

Offered by Tianhao L.

enn College-Wharton Dual Degree | 17 Top-20 Acceptances

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Studied at Harvard Medical School

Package Description:

This package is designed for high school students wanting extra guidance and support for Common App AND BYU application essays. If you are comfortable drafting your application essays on your own but looking for an admissions application expert to review your essays--this is the package for you! Your essays will be reviewed for effectiveness in answering prompts, making sure your essays contain content unique to you that will convey meaning to admissions readers, and editing suggestions to give you the best shot at admissions. With this package, you'll receive a detailed review of one Common App essay of your choice (note: two of the Common App prompts are also included in the BYU application). You’re welcome to use this essay for other schools and adapt it as needed for BYU. You'll also get one full review of all of your BYU essays—completely free. Please note that this package is in compliance with BYU's application guidelines. BYU's application includes the following language: - "You may not use generative AI tools (like ChatGPT) as you compose your responses" - "You may not pay anyone to help you with your application." — Coaches have agreed to provide all BYU support 100% for FREE for students who work with them through this package. - "You may ask others to read and review your essays to ensure that you are answering the prompt clearly and effectively." — Your coach will provide free essay revisions in line with this guidance - "Although it is acceptable to have others review your essays prior to submission, the words and ideas must be your own." — Your coach will never write essays for you, but they will support you as you craft a winning essay that resonates with the admissions team. In summary, this package is in compliance with BYU's application guidance. We've helped thousands of students with their BYU and other college applications and are excited to support you as you pursue this important goal. We are also deeply grateful to our BYU experts who have offered to provide BYU coaching for free for their clients who work with them on other schools.


What you'll get from this package

Compelling essays that are differentiated, personalized, and thoughtful

Final essays that convey the values your dream schools are looking for

A clear timeline and plan to keep you on track


Additional details

Coaching delivered via live sessions and .

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Tianhao L.

Offered by Tianhao L.

Joined April 2026

enn College-Wharton Dual Degree | 17 Top-20 Acceptances

I’m qualified to coach undergrad applicants because I’ve succeeded in highly selective admissions myself and have also helped many others do the same. I was admitted to 17 Top-20 undergraduate institutions and went on to attend the University of Pennsylvania as a dual-degree student across the College of Arts and Sciences and Wharton. My own admissions journey gave me firsthand insight into what top schools look for and how to build an application that is not only impressive, but also cohesive, authentic, and memorable. Beyond my personal experience, I founded Liyue Consulting, where I’ve helped 100+ students gain admission to their dream colleges. Through that work, I’ve developed deep experience in activity planning, essay review, school selection, and interview preparation. I understand that strong college applications are not built at the last minute; they come from thoughtful positioning, clear storytelling, and a strategy tailored to each student’s strengths and goals. My goal as a coach is to help students maximize their potential and present the strongest possible version of themselves.

$765

2h–4h of coaching

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