Final College Application Review

Final College Application Review

Offered by Randy D.

5.0

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Top Journalist, PR, Marketing, Biz Writer 20+ yrs | Nail your Application!

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Studied at Robert H. Smith School of Business

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Worked at Procter & Gamble

Package Description:

This package is designed for applicants who are nearing the finish line and want to ensure their college applications are polished and ready for submission. You’ll work with a world-class coach to fine-tune every component of your application so you can apply with confidence. Common coaching activities in this package include, but are not limited to: - Comprehensive Review: Assess your full application—including personal statement, supplements, and activities list—for consistency and strength - Detailed Feedback: Receive actionable, thoughtful suggestions to sharpen your materials - Final Edits: Work with your coach to polish your writing and eliminate errors - Submission Confidence: Ensure your application is clear, compelling, and fully aligned with your story


What you'll get from this package

Final drafts of your personal statement and supplements that you’re proud to submit

An activity list and resume that highlight your impact and leadership

Alignment across your application materials for a strong overall narrative

A polished, cohesive application ready for submission


Additional details

Coaching delivered via live sessions and .

Refund Policy

Additional expectations or terms of engagement may be provided by coaches (e.g. expected response times, etc.).

Services included:

Secondary Review


Randy D.

Offered by Randy D.

Joined May 2025

5.0

Top Journalist, PR, Marketing, Biz Writer 20+ yrs | Nail your Application!

The way we are taught to write in school is wrong. You know the style—boring, wordy, and utterly forgettable! It takes hours to write, and the end product is gray wallpaper, which lacks story and blends in to every other essay. That won't get you where you want to go...unless as an academic you're publishing in a scientific journal that no one will ever read. I am a highly trained writer. I graduated in PR/Journalism, was named #1 senior in Journalism, and was a writer for 2 years for PR and Marketing departments through school. My writing helped me secure scholarships, internships, and a job for one of the largest PR agencies in the world. I thought I knew how to write. I was wrong. Years later, I was Global Brand Manager at P&G leading a $2B brand. In this $85B company, multi-million dollar decisions were made based on written one-pagers. Clear and compelling writing was vital. They taught, "Writing = Thinking. If you can't write clearly, you haven't thought clearly." I learned how to write for impact and do it in a fraction of the time. If you are applying for college admission, a specific program, or internship, I can help you to nail the writing, stand out, and secure your place.

10+ people coached for College

Starting at $218

3h+ of coaching