Final College Application Review

Final College Application Review

Offered by Olutosin S.

5.0

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Stanford Alumni & Interviewer | Essay Expert

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Studied at Harvard Business School

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Hiring Manager at CareerVillage.org

Package Description:

This package is designed for applicants who are nearing the finish line and want to ensure their college applications are polished and ready for submission. You’ll work with a world-class coach to fine-tune every component of your application so you can apply with confidence. Common coaching activities in this package include, but are not limited to: - Comprehensive Review: Assess your full application—including personal statement, supplements, and activities list—for consistency and strength - Detailed Feedback: Receive actionable, thoughtful suggestions to sharpen your materials - Final Edits: Work with your coach to polish your writing and eliminate errors - Submission Confidence: Ensure your application is clear, compelling, and fully aligned with your story


What you'll get from this package

Final drafts of your personal statement and supplements that you’re proud to submit

An activity list and resume that highlight your impact and leadership

Alignment across your application materials for a strong overall narrative

A polished, cohesive application ready for submission


Additional details

Coaching delivered via live sessions and .

Refund Policy

Additional expectations or terms of engagement may be provided by coaches (e.g. expected response times, etc.).

Services included:

Secondary Review


Olutosin S.

Offered by Olutosin S.

Joined November 2023

5.0

Stanford Alumni & Interviewer | Essay Expert

Hello! I've gone through the application process for getting into school 4 times in the past decades. I've earned degrees from Stanford University (BS), Georgia Institute of Technology (MS), and Harvard University (MBA and MS). I especially enjoy writing and editing essays; I had my undergraduate essay for Stanford featured in a book titled "50 successful Stanford Application Essays : Write Your Way Into the College of your Choice", was a finalist for the Boothe Prize for Excellence in Freshman Writing, and scored in the 99% percentile for verbal reasoning on both the GMAT and SAT. I've also had the honor and privilege of serving as an Admissions Interview Volunteer for my alma mater for a few years. As a result of all of this experience, I believe that I have a deep understanding of the college admissions process and what it takes to get into a great university. I have a track record of helping students achieve their goals, whether it's through mentoring programs like Big Brothers Big Sisters or facilitating workshops with organizations like /dev/color. I've had experience as a teaching assistant at Stanford and done research work in graduate education so I have a unique perspective on the challenges students face and how to overcome them. Let's work together to create a personalized plan that will set you up for success.

$654.75 - $1,068.75

3h - 5h of coaching

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