Write Powerful College Essays

Write Powerful College Essays

Offered by Johnny N.

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UC Berkeley Regents' and Chancellor's Scholar

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Studied at Harvard Business School

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Works at McKinsey & Company

Package Description:

This package is designed for college applicants aiming to craft exceptional essays that maximize their chances of admission. This package includes the following, but feel free to adapt based on your unique situation and goals: - Initial Kickoff and Planning Session: Begin with an in-depth kickoff session with your coach to discuss your background, goals, experiences, and aspirations. This session sets the stage for creating compelling college essays. - Application Strategy: Collaborate with your coach to identify your unique points of differentiation as an applicant and strategize the best ways to highlight these in your essays. - Essay Brainstorming: Dive deep into your background and experiences with your coach to uncover themes, perspectives, and qualities that set you apart. Together, you’ll explore various narratives to ensure your essays capture your true essence. - Essay Crafting: Work with your coach to craft powerful narratives rooted in your unique story that help the admissions committee understand why you would be a valuable addition to their campus. - Essay Editing: After developing your essays' narratives, your coach will provide thorough editing and feedback, refining each draft until the essays are polished and ready for submission. Multiple rounds of edits ensure the final products are perfect. To summarize, this package pairs you with a world-class coach who will guide you through every step of creating standout college essays. They will offer honest and constructive feedback, ensuring your essays showcase your strengths and individuality.


What you'll get from this package

Compelling essays that are differentiated, personalized, and thoughtful — tailored to each school you decide to apply to

A deeper understanding of who you are, what impact you plan to have on the world, and why schools should care

An outline and several drafts of essays that get you closer to the final polished version that will stand out to admissions teams


Additional details

Coaching delivered via live sessions and .

Refund Policy

Additional expectations or terms of engagement may be provided by coaches (e.g. expected response times, etc.).

Services included:

Editing

Application Strategy

Essays


Johnny N.

Offered by Johnny N.

Joined April 2025

5.0

UC Berkeley Regents' and Chancellor's Scholar

As the first in my family to attend college who earned a full-ride scholarship to UC Berkeley, I deeply understand the stakes, challenges, and emotional weight of the college application process—especially for students navigating it without a roadmap. I've mentored students from underserved and immigrant communities, helping them find their voice, craft compelling narratives, and confidently choose schools that align with their goals and values. Whether you're applying to UCs, Ivy Leagues, or liberal arts colleges, I’ll support you not just in writing strong essays, but in believing that you belong. I know how transformative the right education can be—and I’m here to help you get there.

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5h+ of coaching

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