Craft Powerful Admissions Essays

Craft Powerful Admissions Essays

Offered by Hanie L.

5.0

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Schwarzman Scholar | Columbia, Cornell, Chicago Booth Admit

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Studied at Tsinghua University

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Works at Morgan Stanley

Package Description:

This package is designed for applicants who want to write compelling, authentic essays that elevate their Master’s program applications. Whether you're just starting to brainstorm or refining final drafts, this package provides expert guidance to help your story stand out. You’ll partner with a Leland coach to clarify your narrative, highlight your strengths, and shape essays that resonate with admissions committees. Common coaching activities in this package include, but are not limited to: - Kickoff & Planning: Discuss your background, goals, and experiences to lay the groundwork for essays that align with your personal and professional journey. - Application Strategy: Identify key strengths and differentiators to emphasize across your materials, creating a cohesive and standout application. - Essay Brainstorming: Explore themes and storylines with your coach to uncover authentic, impactful narratives. - Essay Development: Write and shape essays that clearly convey your fit for the program and reflect your unique voice and aspirations. - Essay Refinement: Receive detailed feedback and edits to polish your essays for clarity, cohesion, and confidence at submission. This package is ideal for applicants who want to craft essays that are powerful, purposeful, and fully aligned with their goals.


What you'll get from this package

Compelling essays that are differentiated, personalized, and thoughtful — tailored to each school you decide to apply to

A deeper understanding of who you are, what impact you plan to have on the world, and why different programs should care

An outline and several drafts of essays that get you closer to the final polished version that will stand out to admissions teams


Additional details

Coaching delivered via live sessions and .

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Services included:

Editing

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Hanie L.

Offered by Hanie L.

Joined September 2024

5.0

Schwarzman Scholar | Columbia, Cornell, Chicago Booth Admit

As a Cohort 10th Schwarzman Scholar at Tsinghua University (#1 in Asia with only 3-5% acceptance rate from a competitive pool of 5,000+ applicants annually), I have firsthand experience with one of the most competitive master's programs globally. My academic journey also includes graduating with First Class Honours from the University of Hong Kong, where I was a recipient of multiple prestigious scholarships and later I got admitted to several M7 and T15 MBA programs, including The Wharton School, Chicago Booth, Columbia Business School ($130K fellowship), and Cornell Johnson ($70K fellowship). Professionally, I am a Management Trainee at Morgan Stanley, where I have developed expertise across various departments and championed diversity initiatives. I am passionate about helping aspiring master's students navigate the complex admissions process and secure their place in top programs, especially prestigious graduate fellowships and scholarships across China, Europe, and the United States. Let's connect to craft a compelling application that highlights your unique strengths and potential!

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5h+ of coaching

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