Final College Application Review

Final College Application Review

Offered by Emily H.

5.0

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Experienced admissions coach perfect for providing holistic feedback

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Studied at University of Chicago

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Worked at McKinsey & Company

Package Description:

This package is designed for applicants who are nearing the finish line and want to ensure their college applications are polished and ready for submission. You’ll work with a world-class coach to fine-tune every component of your application so you can apply with confidence. Common coaching activities in this package include, but are not limited to: - Comprehensive Review: Assess your full application—including personal statement, supplements, and activities list—for consistency and strength - Detailed Feedback: Receive actionable, thoughtful suggestions to sharpen your materials - Final Edits: Work with your coach to polish your writing and eliminate errors - Submission Confidence: Ensure your application is clear, compelling, and fully aligned with your story


What you'll get from this package

Final drafts of your personal statement and supplements that you’re proud to submit

An activity list and resume that highlight your impact and leadership

Alignment across your application materials for a strong overall narrative

A polished, cohesive application ready for submission


Additional details

Coaching delivered via live sessions and .

Refund Policy

Additional expectations or terms of engagement may be provided by coaches (e.g. expected response times, etc.).

Services included:

Secondary Review


Emily H.

Offered by Emily H.

Joined May 2023

5.0

Experienced admissions coach perfect for providing holistic feedback

I have a wealth of experience and achievements that uniquely qualify me to be an outstanding coach for students aspiring to enter undergraduate schools. As a graduate of the University of Chicago, I not only completed my studies with distinction but also received recognition as the top female student. This accomplishment speaks to my commitment to academic excellence and sets me apart as a role model for aspiring students. Furthermore, I was awarded scholarships and granted admission to renowned institutions, including Berkeley and other Ivy League schools. These accomplishments serve as concrete examples of the paths that potential clients themselves may aspire to walk, fostering trust and inspiration. Beyond my academic achievements, I have a diverse range of experiences that make me an aspirational coach for students. Throughout high school, I balanced my studies with employment in the restaurant industry, displaying a strong work ethic and the ability to manage multiple responsibilities simultaneously. As the valedictorian of my high school, I self-studied and successfully completed 17 Advanced Placement (AP) courses, demonstrating my self-motivation and intellectual curiosity. Moreover, my leadership roles as the captain of the Speech and Debate team and an officer of the Model United Nations (MUN) team showcase my effective communication and teamwork skills, which are invaluable assets for navigating the college admissions process. In addition to my accomplishments, I have a unique perspective on the college admissions process. I have experienced the challenges of mental health struggles firsthand, having been hospitalized at multiple points during my educational journey. This personal journey allows me to empathize with the anxieties and pressures that students face during this crucial time. I underwent a transformative period of self-reflection and evaluation in college, ultimately emerging with a clearer understanding of my own purposes and goals. I am passionate about helping others embark on their college journeys with a similar perspective, guiding them to gain a deeper understanding of themselves and their aspirations. By sharing my experiences and resources, I aim to make college admissions more accessible and empower students to navigate this process successfully. By incorporating specific examples of achievements, highlighting unique experiences, and sharing aspirational stories, I aim to build trust and resonate with potential clients seeking guidance in their quest to enter undergraduate schools.

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Open to working with clients outside the U.S.

$407 - $665

3h - 5h of coaching

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