Personal Essay: Weave Your Story

Personal Essay: Weave Your Story

Offered by Elizabeth A.

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HBS MBA | 4x M7 Admit | Humanities Major | Resume, Essay Edits & Strategy

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Package Description:

This package is designed for those who already have a drafted essay and need help with editing, refining, polishing, and re-working to address divergent yet critical interests that contribute to their broader application. Here's how we'll work together for this package: - Initial Consultation — We'll start with a 30-minute meeting to review your personal and professional background along with your goals for your MBA process and career. - First Essay Review — I'll review your essay ahead of our first essay review call and make initial suggested changes and comments in a new document. - First Essay Workshop — I'll share my detailed changes and comments and provide feedback on how else we could improve your essay using more descriptive language, clearer structuring, or concision. - Second Essay Review — I'll review the next draft of your essay ahead of our second essay review call and make additional changes and comments in another new document. - Second Essay Workshop — I'll share my changes and comments and provide feedback on any further changes needed to finalize your essay. This package includes one 30-minute kick-off call, two async reviews, and two 1-hour live sessions. If you're interested in an extended initial brainstorming session, please reach out and we can discuss a custom package.


What you'll get from this package

A strong, finalized essay that ties in well with your MBA application and communicates who you are and what makes you stand out from other candidates

Confidence in writing additional essays using your unique story that can be adapted to target other MBA programs


Additional details

Coaching delivered via live sessions and .

After our initial meeting, I'll review your essay on my own time ahead of our scheduled calls and we'll talk through feedback and any other questions you or I have during our live sessions.

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Elizabeth A.

Offered by Elizabeth A.

Joined July 2023

5.0

HBS MBA | 4x M7 Admit | Humanities Major | Resume, Essay Edits & Strategy

Having gone through the MBA application process and achieved admittance to the five schools to which I applied (Booth, Darden, HBS, Kellogg, and Wharton), I know the dedication required to submit compelling applications that yield your desired result. In addition to this, I've helped a number of prospective MBAs think through their interest in business schools in general, as well as strategize to improve their candidacy. This has ranged from advice on taking specific courses to demonstrate capabilities in weak areas (e.g., 3-credit online, quantitative course to balance a humanities major or a low undergrad quant grade) to tactical tips on navigating a waitlist successfully and receiving an offer of admission. This has also included guidance on GMAT and GRE prep and big-picture thinking to investigate a targeted list of post-MBA career options. I came from a more traditional background at first glance (investment banking, private equity) but had a non-traditional major (Art History) coupled with a personal passion (sustainability) that I hadn't yet explored professionally, but was committed to pursuing in the future. Strengthening weak spots while weaving together my divergent experiences and interests (art, music, Italian language and culture, volunteer tutoring, environmentalism, finance) in my application and detailing my targeted career path (sustainable finance) was a challenging but rewarding experience. I'd love to help you think through links between the many diverse and seemingly disconnected experiences we often have when applying to MBA programs.

$594

4h 30m of coaching

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