Write a Powerful Personal Statement

Write a Powerful Personal Statement

Offered by Diane Z.

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Yale MD/MBA | Former Admissions Committee Member | Class President

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Studied at Yale School of Management

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Works at Inspira Advantage

Package Description:

This package is designed for aspiring medical school candidates who want to craft a compelling and standout personal statement, maximizing their chances of acceptance. This package includes the following, but feel free to adapt based on your unique situation and goals: - Initial Kickoff and Planning Session: Begin with an in-depth kickoff session with your coach to discuss your background, goals, experiences, and aspirations. This session sets the foundation for creating a powerful personal statement. - Personal Statement Brainstorming: Dive deep into your background and experiences with your coach to uncover themes, perspectives, and qualities that set you apart. You'll explore various narratives to ensure your personal statement captures your true essence. - Personal Statement Drafting: Work closely with your coach to draft your personal statement, ensuring it effectively highlights your motivations, experiences, and aspirations. - Personal Statement Editing: After developing your personal statement's narrative, your coach will provide thorough editing and feedback, refining each draft until the statement is polished and ready for submission. Multiple rounds of edits ensure the final product is perfect. To summarize, this package pairs you with a world-class coach who will guide you through every step of creating a standout personal statement. They will offer honest and constructive feedback, ensuring your personal statement showcases your strengths and uniqueness. Ready to craft a compelling personal statement? Let's match you with a great coach who can help you secure that coveted acceptance to a top medical school.


What you'll get from this package

A compelling personal statement that is differentiated, personalized, and thoughtful

A deeper understanding of your motivations, experiences, and aspirations, and how they align with your goal of becoming a physician

An outline and several drafts of your personal statement, refined through multiple rounds of feedback and edits

Confidence that your personal statement will stand out to medical school admissions committees

A polished final personal statement that you can feel proud of submitting and sharing with the admissions team


Additional details

Coaching delivered via live sessions and .

Refund Policy

Additional expectations or terms of engagement may be provided by coaches (e.g. expected response times, etc.).

Services included:

Personal Statement


Diane Z.

Offered by Diane Z.

Joined December 2025

5.0

Yale MD/MBA | Former Admissions Committee Member | Class President

👩🏻‍⚕️ I’m a Yale MD/MBA dual-degree candidate and former member of the Yale School of Medicine Admissions Committee, where I interviewed applicants and participated in holistic file review. I deeply understand what admissions teams look for and how to bring forward a student’s authentic voice. My strongest skill is helping applicants turn their experiences into compelling, memorable stories for essays and interviews. 📚 I’ve spent nearly a decade mentoring students through academic advising, essay development, and interview prep, working for companies like Inspira Advantage. My approach is highly individualized and narrative-driven: I work closely with applicants who often feel unsure about their path, helping them find clarity, confidence, and a powerful through-line in their personal journeys. Whether you’re applying to MD, MD/MBA, or postbac programs, I help you express why you, why medicine, and why now with depth and authenticity. 🏛️ At Yale, I have been Class President for the past four years and serve as a Student Ambassador during admissions events. I’ve also held leadership roles in psychiatry, health equity, and innovation, including serving on the Psychiatry Association, organizing the Yale Healthcare Conference, and representing Yale in the global Impact Investing Competition. I’ve delivered clinical care in free clinics from New Haven to San Francisco and contributed to asylum evaluations supporting trauma-informed immigration cases. ❤️ I am a first generation immigrant and the first in my family to pursue medicine. I care deeply about supporting applicants who do not come from traditional backgrounds or who may not have had structured guidance. I meet students where they are and help them express who they are with clarity and confidence so they can present the strongest and most genuine version of themselves.

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10+ people coached for Medical School

Starting at $612.75

5h+ of coaching

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