Final College Application Review

Final College Application Review

Offered by Daniel G.

From UPenn to the White House | Essay Coach | 100+ Admits at Top Unis

University of Pennsylvania Logo

Studied at University of Pennsylvania

The White House Logo

Worked at The White House

Package Description:

This package is designed for applicants who are nearing the finish line and want to ensure their college applications are polished and ready for submission. You’ll work with a world-class coach to fine-tune every component of your application so you can apply with confidence. Common coaching activities in this package include, but are not limited to: - Comprehensive Review: Assess your full application—including personal statement, supplements, and activities list—for consistency and strength - Detailed Feedback: Receive actionable, thoughtful suggestions to sharpen your materials - Final Edits: Work with your coach to polish your writing and eliminate errors - Submission Confidence: Ensure your application is clear, compelling, and fully aligned with your story


What you'll get from this package

Final drafts of your personal statement and supplements that you’re proud to submit

An activity list and resume that highlight your impact and leadership

Alignment across your application materials for a strong overall narrative

A polished, cohesive application ready for submission


Additional details

Coaching delivered via live sessions and .

Refund Policy

Additional expectations or terms of engagement may be provided by coaches (e.g. expected response times, etc.).

Services included:

Secondary Review


More packages from Daniel

Custom hourly · $135/hr

Get help with Recommendations, Interviews, and .

View all of Daniel’s categories


Daniel G.

Offered by Daniel G.

Joined June 2025

From UPenn to the White House | Essay Coach | 100+ Admits at Top Unis

The college essay is the one part of your application that's entirely yours: no GPA, no test score, and no class rank. Just your story. And how you tell it changes everything. I know this firsthand. I went through the same high-stakes process you're facing, earned my degree from the University of Pennsylvania, and went on to work in the White House, an experience that sharpened my writing, my ability to communicate under pressure, and my understanding of what it takes to stand out in rooms full of exceptional people. That's exactly the challenge you're facing now. Over the past 5+ years of college admissions coaching, I've helped 100+ students earn admission to schools like Northwestern, Brown, UPenn, Berkeley, NYU, Wesleyan, and the LSE not by making their essays sound impressive, but by making them sound true. There's a difference, and admissions officers can feel it instantly. My approach is simple: I dig into who you actually are — your experiences, contradictions, obsessions, and blind spots — and help you build an essay around the version of yourself that's most worth knowing. I won't write a word of it for you. But I will push you, question you, and edit you until the essay sounds like the best, most honest version of your voice on the page. If you're ready to stop stressing and start writing something you're proud of, let's talk.

Coaches professionally

100+ people coached for College

Starting at $392.85

3h+ of coaching

 
Sign in
Free events
Programs