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Final R2 Essay Fix Sprint: Improve Your Story With AI Without Starting Over
Final R2 Essay Fix Sprint: Improve Your Story With AI Without Starting Over
Offered by Breanne W.
4.9
Wharton MBA | Expert Coach for Nontraditional MBA Applicants
Studied at The Wharton School (UPenn)
Works at Breanne White Consulting
Package Description:
2.5 hours total support, all-inclusive Pre-session review of your essay drafts to identify key issues 60-minute live 1:1 working session focused on: *Fixing structure, flow, and clarity *Strengthening your core story and positioning *Identifying what to cut, reframe, or emphasize *AI-guided diagnostics and prompts to help you revise more efficiently (ethical, admissions-safe use) Post-session review of revised essays, after you make changes: *Targeted feedback to confirm issues are resolved *Final refinement guidance for submission readiness
What you'll get from this package
A clear diagnosis of what’s not working in your current MBA essay drafts
Stronger structure, clarity, and narrative flow across essays
Clear guidance on what to cut, reframe, or emphasize
Additional details
Coaching delivered via live sessions.
I work with clients in a focused, practical way, especially when deadlines are close. I review materials in advance so our live session is spent making clear decisions about structure, story, and positioning. We may use AI as a thought partner to spot gaps, test clarity, or pressure-check your narrative, making sure that the work stays grounded in your experience and voice. After the session, I review revised drafts to make sure the changes are working and guide final refinements. My goal is to help you submit clear, confident applications without unnecessary rewrites or overthinking.
Services included:
Editing
Secondary Review
Application Strategy
Essays
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4.9
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As a Wharton MBA graduate who came from a non-traditional background and a non-target undergraduate school, I know what it takes to break into top MBA programs without the typical resume. I didn’t have a brand-name employer or Ivy League degree—and I still earned a spot at one of the world’s most competitive business schools. That journey taught me how to craft a powerful narrative, highlight unconventional strengths, and position unique experiences as assets. I’ve also coached dozens of high school students through college essays, helping them tell authentic, compelling stories that get results. I bring that same insight, structure, and empathy to MBA applicants—especially those who don’t fit the traditional mold but have so much to offer.
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