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Already have a draft you want a second opinion on? Submit it and I'll send it back with detailed inline comments, honest feedback, and a written summary of exactly what's working and what isn't. Turnaround is 2 to 3 business days. Got a tight deadline? Reach out and I'll do my best to accommodate. This goes far beyond proofreading. I look at structure, clarity, tone, whether it actually answers the prompt, and whether it sounds like you. I'll tell you what to fix and how to fix it. Works for Common App essays, supplementals, and scholarship responses. What you'll get: - A fully marked-up essay with detailed inline comments - Honest feedback on structure, clarity, tone, and prompt alignment - A written summary with clear next steps - 2 to 3 business day turnaround
What you'll get from this package
Receive a fully marked-up essay with detailed inline comments for comprehensive feedback.
Gain honest insights on structure, clarity, tone, and alignment with the prompt.
Ensure your essay maintains your unique voice and effectively answers the prompt.
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Former Columbia Student Interviewer | Columbia undergrad + Wharton MBA
As a Columbia graduate and an incoming MBA candidate at The Wharton School I offer coaching for both undergraduate and MBA applicants. Over the past 6+ years I have successfully advised students who have gained admission into top schools such as Stanford, Yale, Princeton, Brown, UPenn, UC Berkeley, and USC. What I offer: Story-telling: A bad story can kill a great application and a great story could be what gets you into your dream school. I help prospective applicants craft a singular narrative that is authentic, compelling and intentional. Interview training: As a trained interviewer at Columbia I am able to give high quality mock interviews for any program International perspective: I did not go to high school in the US and there was no playbook for college admissions. I navigated the undergraduate and MBA application process on my own, and received admissions to several Ivy Leagues and top schools.