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The Portrait: Personal Statement — First Idea to Polished Final

The Portrait: Personal Statement — First Idea to Polished Final

Offered by Sonya P.

5.0

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Stanford + Columbia | Elite College Essay Specialist | 8+ Years

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Description

- 2-hour discovery session with 5–6 core exercises designed to uncover your unique story - Full drafting, rewriting & revisions - Regular meetings and ongoing revision until your Personal Statement is ready to submit - Polished final essay - Annotated examples of successful essays of former students who got into Ivy League and Ivy League+ schools - Application context review — activities list, honors & written components assessed to ensure the essay strengthens the whole - Parent communication included — structured updates and open correspondence throughout - Unlimited email correspondence — same-day responses, never billed separately


What you'll get from this package

A polished, submission-ready personal statement that is compelling, authentic, and unmistakably yours.

A clear, authentic narrative — the story only you can tell — uncovered through guided discovery exercises.

A full trail of drafts with annotated feedback, so you can see exactly how your essay grew from first idea to final.

The confidence that your essay sounds unmistakably like you — at your very best.


Additional details

Coaching delivered via live sessions and .

My approach is personal and voice-first. Here's how we work together: 01 Discovery Session A focused 2-hour conversation using 5–6 core exercises designed to surface the right essay topic. In most cases, this single session is enough to determine the essay's direction. 02 Essay Examples & Benchmarks You receive a curated set of successful essays of the same type you're writing — with detailed analysis of why each one worked and what made it stand out to admissions readers. 03 Structure & Voice We build the architecture of your essay together — hook, paragraph order, conclusion — then focus on the depth that separates memorable essays from competent ones: your real story, told in your real voice. 04 · Drafting & Revision — Every draft receives both structural and line-level feedback, so we strengthen the essay's story and its writing. Revisions are unlimited — we refine word choice, tone, pacing, and style until the essay sounds unmistakably like you, at your best. 05 Timeline Management Deadlines are tracked and every step is scheduled in advance, so we have enough time for thoughtful drafting and revision. The goal is a polished final essay — never a rushed one. Always included — I stay in direct contact with you and your family throughout, with unlimited, same-day email support (never billed separately). And I coach the whole application — activities, positioning, and strategy — not just the essay, so every piece works toward the same goal. Every student I work with gets my full attention. I take on a limited number of students because I believe the quality of the work matters more than the volume. Whether you need help with a single essay or comprehensive support through every stage of your application, I'll build a plan around you — your story, your strengths, and the schools where you can truly thrive.

Refund Policy

Services included:

Application Strategy

Essays

Editing


Sonya P.

Offered by Sonya P.

Joined July 2026

5.0

Stanford + Columbia | Elite College Essay Specialist | 8+ Years

I’m a Stanford- and Columbia-educated college admissions consultant with 8+ years of experience helping high-achieving students gain admission to selective universities in the U.S. and UK. I specialize in college essays and personal storytelling, helping students develop authentic, compelling applications that sound like them—not like everyone else. My students have earned admission to Columbia, UPenn, Cornell, Duke, Brown, UChicago, UCLA, USC, NYU, Vanderbilt, UMich, UC Berkeley, Oxford, Cambridge, and many other highly selective programs. I’ve also helped students raise SAT scores to 1590 and successfully compete for major awards, including Fulbright. I particularly enjoy working with ambitious students, and I welcome both domestic and international families. My approach combines strategic admissions expertise with hands-on writing guidance: I help students identify what makes their story distinctive, communicate it authentically, and build an application that is both compelling and cohesive.

Coaches professionally

$2,700

12h of coaching