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The Collection: Personal Statement + Essays for 3 Schools

The Collection: Personal Statement + Essays for 3 Schools

Offered by Sonya P.

5.0

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Stanford + Columbia | Elite College Essay Specialist | 8+ Years

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Description

- Everything in The Portrait Package: - 2-hour discovery session with 5–6 core exercises designed to uncover your unique story - Full drafting, rewriting & revisions - Regular meetings and ongoing revision until your Personal Statement is ready to submit - Polished final essay - Annotated examples of successful essays of former students who got into Ivy League and Ivy League+ schools - Application context review — activities list, honors & written components assessed to ensure the essay strengthens the whole - Parent communication included — structured updates and open correspondence throughout - Unlimited email correspondence — same-day responses, never billed separately PLUS Everything in The Declaration - All supplemental essays for your 1st choice university - Full revision & polish on all supplemental essays - Holistic application review — activities list, honors & all written components PLUS - Supplemental essays for 2 additional schools (3 schools total) - School-specific research for each university - Holistic application review — activities list, honors & all written components - Parent communication included throughout - Additional schools available at $1000 per school - Unlimited email correspondence — same-day responses, never billed separately


What you'll get from this package

A polished, submission-ready personal statement that stands out at the most selective U.S. universities.

A clear, authentic narrative — the story only you can tell — uncovered through guided discovery.

A full trail of drafts with annotated feedback, so you can see exactly how each essay grew from first idea to final.

An essay that sounds unmistakably like you — and sharper writing instincts you'll carry into every supplement that follows.

A complete, cohesive set of supplemental essays for three schools (including your first choice) — every "Why us," short answer, and activity description working together.

School-specific research and positioning for each of the three universities, so every application speaks directly to what that school values.

A repeatable essay method and a clear, established voice you can apply yourself to any further schools — which is exactly why each school beyond the three costs just $1000.


Additional details

Coaching delivered via live sessions and .

My approach is personal and voice-first. Here's how we work together: 01 Discovery Session A focused 2-hour conversation using 5–6 core exercises designed to surface the right essay topic. In most cases, this single session is enough to determine the essay's direction. 02 Essay Examples & Benchmarks You receive a curated set of successful essays of the same type you're writing — with detailed analysis of why each one worked and what made it stand out to admissions readers. 03 Structure & Voice We build the architecture of your essay together — hook, paragraph order, conclusion — then focus on the depth that separates memorable essays from competent ones: your real story, told in your real voice. 04 · Drafting & Revision — Every draft receives both structural and line-level feedback, so we strengthen the essay's story and its writing. Revisions are unlimited — we refine word choice, tone, pacing, and style until the essay sounds unmistakably like you, at your best. 05 Timeline Management Deadlines are tracked and every step is scheduled in advance, so we have enough time for thoughtful drafting and revision. The goal is a polished final essay — never a rushed one. Always included — I stay in direct contact with you and your family throughout, with unlimited, same-day email support (never billed separately). And I coach the whole application — activities, positioning, and strategy — not just the essay, so every piece works toward the same goal. Every student I work with gets my full attention. I take on a limited number of students because I believe the quality of the work matters more than the volume. Whether you need help with a single essay or comprehensive support through every stage of your application, I'll build a plan around you — your story, your strengths, and the schools where you can truly thrive.

Refund Policy

Services included:

Recommendations

Interviews

School Selection

Application Strategy

Essays

Resume

General Exploration

Supplementary Materials

Editing


Sonya P.

Offered by Sonya P.

Joined July 2026

5.0

Stanford + Columbia | Elite College Essay Specialist | 8+ Years

I’m a Stanford- and Columbia-educated college admissions consultant with 8+ years of experience helping high-achieving students gain admission to selective universities in the U.S. and UK. I specialize in college essays and personal storytelling, helping students develop authentic, compelling applications that sound like them—not like everyone else. My students have earned admission to Columbia, UPenn, Cornell, Duke, Brown, UChicago, UCLA, USC, NYU, Vanderbilt, UMich, UC Berkeley, Oxford, Cambridge, and many other highly selective programs. I’ve also helped students raise SAT scores to 1590 and successfully compete for major awards, including Fulbright. I particularly enjoy working with ambitious students, and I welcome both domestic and international families. My approach combines strategic admissions expertise with hands-on writing guidance: I help students identify what makes their story distinctive, communicate it authentically, and build an application that is both compelling and cohesive.

Coaches professionally

$7,200

32h–34h of coaching