Write Powerful College Essays

Write Powerful College Essays

Offered by Paul M.

College Transfer Mentor | Transferred from UCR to UCLA

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Studied at California University of Science and Medicine

Package Description:

This package is designed for college applicants aiming to craft exceptional essays that maximize their chances of admission. This package includes the following, but feel free to adapt based on your unique situation and goals: - Initial Kickoff and Planning Session: Begin with an in-depth kickoff session with your coach to discuss your background, goals, experiences, and aspirations. This session sets the stage for creating compelling college essays. - Application Strategy: Collaborate with your coach to identify your unique points of differentiation as an applicant and strategize the best ways to highlight these in your essays. - Essay Brainstorming: Dive deep into your background and experiences with your coach to uncover themes, perspectives, and qualities that set you apart. Together, you’ll explore various narratives to ensure your essays capture your true essence. - Essay Crafting: Work with your coach to craft powerful narratives rooted in your unique story that help the admissions committee understand why you would be a valuable addition to their campus. - Essay Editing: After developing your essays' narratives, your coach will provide thorough editing and feedback, refining each draft until the essays are polished and ready for submission. Multiple rounds of edits ensure the final products are perfect. To summarize, this package pairs you with a world-class coach who will guide you through every step of creating standout college essays. They will offer honest and constructive feedback, ensuring your essays showcase your strengths and individuality.


What you'll get from this package

Compelling essays that are differentiated, personalized, and thoughtful — tailored to each school you decide to apply to

A deeper understanding of who you are, what impact you plan to have on the world, and why schools should care

An outline and several drafts of essays that get you closer to the final polished version that will stand out to admissions teams


Additional details

Coaching delivered via live sessions and .

Refund Policy

Additional expectations or terms of engagement may be provided by coaches (e.g. expected response times, etc.).

Services included:

Editing

Application Strategy

Essays


Paul M.

Offered by Paul M.

Joined January 2026

College Transfer Mentor | Transferred from UCR to UCLA

Welcome! I am a current medical student at the California University of Science and Medicine and a UCLA graduate in Molecular, Cell, and Developmental Biology with a passion for helping students successfully navigate the college admissions process, especially the UC-to-UC transfer pathway. I personally transferred from UC Riverside to UCLA, so I understand firsthand how challenging and confusing this process can be. I do not just teach theory. I share the exact strategies, insights, and lessons I used to make a successful transfer, from building a strong academic narrative to positioning your experiences effectively. My goal is to help you craft a compelling, authentic application that highlights your strengths, growth, and long-term aspirations. If you are aiming for a competitive UC transfer and want guidance from someone who has done it, let’s work together to make your college goals a reality.

10+ people coached for College

Starting at $190

5h+ of coaching

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