Write Powerful College Essays

Write Powerful College Essays

Offered by Mel B.

5.0

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Former Admissions Staff | Pro Coach | Make your app stand out

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Studied at New York University

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Admissions Committee at The University of Texas at Austin

Package Description:

This package is designed for college applicants aiming to craft exceptional essays that maximize their chances of admission. This package includes the following, but feel free to adapt based on your unique situation and goals: - Initial Kickoff and Planning Session: Begin with an in-depth kickoff session with your coach to discuss your background, goals, experiences, and aspirations. This session sets the stage for creating compelling college essays. - Application Strategy: Collaborate with your coach to identify your unique points of differentiation as an applicant and strategize the best ways to highlight these in your essays. - Essay Brainstorming: Dive deep into your background and experiences with your coach to uncover themes, perspectives, and qualities that set you apart. Together, you’ll explore various narratives to ensure your essays capture your true essence. - Essay Crafting: Work with your coach to craft powerful narratives rooted in your unique story that help the admissions committee understand why you would be a valuable addition to their campus. - Essay Editing: After developing your essays' narratives, your coach will provide thorough editing and feedback, refining each draft until the essays are polished and ready for submission. Multiple rounds of edits ensure the final products are perfect. To summarize, this package pairs you with a world-class coach who will guide you through every step of creating standout college essays. They will offer honest and constructive feedback, ensuring your essays showcase your strengths and individuality.


What you'll get from this package

Compelling essays that are differentiated, personalized, and thoughtful — tailored to each school you decide to apply to

A deeper understanding of who you are, what impact you plan to have on the world, and why schools should care

An outline and several drafts of essays that get you closer to the final polished version that will stand out to admissions teams


Additional details

Coaching delivered via live sessions and .

Refund Policy

Additional expectations or terms of engagement may be provided by coaches (e.g. expected response times, etc.).

Services included:

Editing

Application Strategy

Essays


Mel B.

Offered by Mel B.

Joined October 2021

5.0

Former Admissions Staff | Pro Coach | Make your app stand out

With over 11 years in higher education at top US institutions such as NYU, Stanford, and UT Austin, I know what it takes for an application to stand out. As a former admissions staff member and campus leader, I’ve read applications, interviewed students, and helped universities share their stories with prospective applicants. I’m also an ICF-Certified Coach and graduate of NYU’s Executive Coaching and Organizational Consulting program. My approach combines admissions expertise with professional coaching techniques to help you identify your strengths, refine your essays, and present your most authentic story. My goal is to help you ensure that your application stands out as memorable and unique to you.

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