Turn Real Experience Into a Clear, Compelling MBA Admit Story

Turn Real Experience Into a Clear, Compelling MBA Admit Story

Offered by Cristin B.

5.0

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Former Army Pilot | Harvard MBA | Leadership & Entrepreneurship

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Studied at Harvard Business School

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Works at Brave Peak Capital

Package Description:

This plan is designed to transform your real-world experiences into a compelling MBA application story that resonates with admissions committees and sets you apart. This is a structured, high-impact sprint designed to help you get clear on your story, translate your experience into something that actually lands, and show up confidently across every part of the MBA process. Across six sessions, we’ll work through the full arc of your application. We’ll start with clarity on whether an MBA makes sense and what you’re optimizing for. From there, we’ll build your core narrative, refine your resume so it reflects real impact, shape essays that sound like you, and prepare you to walk into interviews with confidence. Some clients come in early, just trying to figure out if they should even apply. Others are deep in essays or preparing for interviews. This package meets you where you are, but holds a clear throughline. The goal is not just to submit applications. It’s to build one that actually represents you and gives you a real shot. Together, we’ll work on every aspect of your application to ensure it reflects your true potential and ambitions. Here’s how we’ll do it: Editing & Story Development: We’ll start by diving into your experiences to uncover the core themes that define your leadership style and career goals. I’ll help you articulate these in a way that’s both authentic and strategic, ensuring your story is clear and compelling. Cover Letters & Recommendations: Crafting a standout cover letter and securing strong recommendations are crucial. I’ll guide you in selecting the right recommenders and crafting requests that highlight your strengths and potential. We’ll ensure your cover letters align with your overall narrative and resonate with each program’s values. Interview Preparation: Interviews are your chance to bring your story to life. We’ll conduct mock interviews to refine your delivery, focusing on clarity, confidence, and impact. I’ll provide detailed feedback to help you communicate your vision and leadership potential effectively. Throughout this process, my approach is direct, thoughtful, and collaborative. I’m here to help you present yourself clearly and confidently, not to manufacture a story. Whether you’re just starting your MBA journey or refining your final application, I’m committed to helping you succeed. Let’s work together to turn your experiences into a powerful MBA admit story.


What you'll get from this package

A clear, defensible MBA narrative that connects your past experience, current trajectory, and future goals

A fully rewritten, MBA-ready resume that highlights measurable impact and leadership

Structured outlines and polished drafts for your core essays that sound like you, not a template


Additional details

Coaching delivered via live sessions and .

My coaching style is direct, thoughtful, and collaborative. I’m not here to tell you what you want to hear. I’m here to help you get to a clear, honest, and compelling version of your story that actually holds up under scrutiny. Admissions is not just about what you’ve done. It’s about how you think, how you lead, and where you’re going. What sets my coaching apart is that I bring an operator’s lens. I’ve led teams in high-stakes environments and have been through this process myself, so I’m quick to separate signal from noise. I will push you where needed, but always in service of helping you show up clearly and confidently. The goal is not to manufacture a perfect candidate. It’s to make sure your application reflects who you actually are and gives you a real shot.

Refund Policy

Services included:

Editing

Recommendations

Interviews

Cover Letters


Cristin B.

Offered by Cristin B.

Joined February 2026

5.0

Former Army Pilot | Harvard MBA | Leadership & Entrepreneurship

I’m a Harvard Business School MBA graduate and former President of the Armed Forces Alumni Association, where I spent my time working closely with prospective applicants navigating the MBA process. Before HBS, I served as an Army aviation officer, leading teams in high-stakes environments where clarity, judgment, and accountability mattered. That experience still shapes how I approach coaching today. Admissions committees are not just evaluating what you’ve done. They are trying to understand how you think, how you lead, and what you will do next. I’ve helped applicants at all stages, from people just starting to explore whether an MBA makes sense to those refining final essays and preparing for interviews. Sometimes the work is tactical, like getting a resume to actually reflect your impact or tightening your story so it lands clearly. Other times it is more foundational, helping you step back and articulate what you want and why. I’m here for all of it. My style is direct, thoughtful, and collaborative. The goal is not to manufacture a story, it is to help you show up clearly and confidently as yourself.

Starting at $250

2h+ of coaching

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