MBA STORYTELLING & ESSAYS PACKAGE

MBA STORYTELLING & ESSAYS PACKAGE

Offered by Boluwatife A.

5.0

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Harvard Deferred MBA

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Studied at Massachusetts Institute of Technology

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Worked at Bill & Melinda Gates Foundation

Package Description:

Strong applicants are often rejected because they struggle to communicate their story effectively. Having earned admission to HBS, Yale SOM, and MIT Sloan, I understand what makes an application memorable. Together, we’ll identify your strongest experiences, develop a cohesive narrative, and transform your essays into compelling stories that authentically reflect your leadership potential and career goals.


What you'll get from this package

Personal narrative framework

Essay themes and story bank

MBA resume review

Two rounds of essay feedback

Short-answer review

Final essay polish


Additional details

Coaching delivered via live sessions.

My process is highly collaborative. I don’t rewrite essays for applicants. Instead, I help clients uncover the stories, insights, and themes that make their applications distinctive. You’ll receive direct, actionable feedback focused on authenticity, clarity, and strategic positioning.

Refund Policy

Communication & Response Time: I typically respond to messages within 24 hours on weekdays and often sooner. During periods of high application volume, response times may occasionally be longer. Session Scheduling: Sessions may be rescheduled with at least 12 hours’ notice. Missed sessions or cancellations made with less than 24 hours’ notice may be forfeited. Feedback Turnaround: For written materials such as essays, resumes, or application responses, feedback is typically provided within 3-5 business days unless otherwise agreed upon. What I Provide: I provide coaching, strategy, feedback, and mentorship based on my experiences earning admission to MIT, Harvard Business School, Yale SOM, and MIT Sloan, as well as my professional experience at McKinsey and the Gates Foundation. What I Do Not Provide: I do not write essays, complete applications, or guarantee admissions, job offers, interview invitations, scholarships, or score increases. Success ultimately depends on the applicant’s background, preparation, effort, and execution. Goal: My objective is to help you present the strongest, most authentic, and strategically positioned version of yourself throughout the application or recruiting process.

Services included:

Cover Letters

Secondary Review

Essays

Resume

Editing


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Boluwatife A.

Offered by Boluwatife A.

Joined February 2025

5.0

Harvard Deferred MBA

I got into Harvard Business School, Yale SOM, and MIT Sloan after applying at 20 years old with nothing more than a free Manhattan GRE book, the internet, and a lot of trial and error. No admissions consultant, no AI tools—just countless hours spent studying, reflecting, and rewriting my story until it felt authentic and compelling. If you’re applying to business school, I’d love to help you avoid the mistakes I made, develop a clear application strategy, strengthen your test-taking approach, and craft essays that actually sound like you. My goal is to help you put forward the strongest version of your story and maximize your chances of getting into a school you’ll be excited to attend.

$750

6h of coaching

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