Write Powerful College Essays

Write Powerful College Essays

Offered by Benito N.

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Harvard Admissions Office | Capstone Project Architect | College Strategy

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Package Description:

This package is designed for college applicants aiming to craft exceptional essays that maximize their chances of admission. This package includes the following, but feel free to adapt based on your unique situation and goals: - Initial Kickoff and Planning Session: Begin with an in-depth kickoff session with your coach to discuss your background, goals, experiences, and aspirations. This session sets the stage for creating compelling college essays. - Application Strategy: Collaborate with your coach to identify your unique points of differentiation as an applicant and strategize the best ways to highlight these in your essays. - Essay Brainstorming: Dive deep into your background and experiences with your coach to uncover themes, perspectives, and qualities that set you apart. Together, you’ll explore various narratives to ensure your essays capture your true essence. - Essay Crafting: Work with your coach to craft powerful narratives rooted in your unique story that help the admissions committee understand why you would be a valuable addition to their campus. - Essay Editing: After developing your essays' narratives, your coach will provide thorough editing and feedback, refining each draft until the essays are polished and ready for submission. Multiple rounds of edits ensure the final products are perfect. To summarize, this package pairs you with a world-class coach who will guide you through every step of creating standout college essays. They will offer honest and constructive feedback, ensuring your essays showcase your strengths and individuality.


What you'll get from this package

Compelling essays that are differentiated, personalized, and thoughtful — tailored to each school you decide to apply to

A deeper understanding of who you are, what impact you plan to have on the world, and why schools should care

An outline and several drafts of essays that get you closer to the final polished version that will stand out to admissions teams


Additional details

Coaching delivered via live sessions and .

Refund Policy

Additional expectations or terms of engagement may be provided by coaches (e.g. expected response times, etc.).

Services included:

Editing

Application Strategy

Essays


Benito N.

Offered by Benito N.

Joined July 2024

5.0

Harvard Admissions Office | Capstone Project Architect | College Strategy

Overview I help students move beyond “checking boxes” and instead design meaningful capstone projects, research initiatives, and extracurricular paths that make their applications stand out at highly selective universities. As a graduate of Harvard College and former coordinator with the Harvard Admissions Office, I’ve spent more than 18 years working with students and families worldwide to navigate the college admissions process and build applications that reflect genuine intellectual curiosity and purpose. Common Areas I Help Students With • Capstone project design and execution • Building a distinctive extracurricular narrative • Selective college admissions strategy • Application and essay storytelling Background As the oldest son of immigrant parents from Japan and Mexico and the first in my family to graduate from college, I understand the cultural and socioeconomic barriers many students face in pursuing their educational goals. That perspective shapes how I mentor students from diverse backgrounds as they pursue ambitious academic paths. At Harvard, I studied Cultural Anthropology and languages including Spanish, Korean, and Japanese. During my undergraduate years, I lived and studied abroad in Seoul, Bangalore, Cape Town, and Buenos Aires while focusing on global development, culture, and politics. Since then, I’ve traveled to 45 countries and 46 U.S. states, experiences that continue to shape my global perspective on education and opportunity. Track Record Since 2011, I have worked directly with hundreds of high school students and spoken to thousands more across every continent about navigating the U.S. college admissions landscape. My students have been admitted to highly selective institutions including Harvard, MIT, Stanford, Princeton, Yale, UC Berkeley, the University of Chicago, and many other leading universities. Professional Experience Beyond admissions advising, I previously worked at Google in Mountain View, where I supported hiring processes including resume reviews, interviews, and performance evaluations across engineering and sales teams. I have also worked with a range of nonprofit organizations in healthcare, technology, and education. Students I Work Best With • High-achieving students aiming for top 20 universities • Students interested in building meaningful capstone or research projects • Students with strong curiosity but unclear academic direction • International students navigating U.S. admissions Closing My advising approach is collaborative, strategic, and human-centered. The goal isn’t simply getting into college — it’s helping students build something meaningful along the way. If you're looking for guidance on developing a standout application narrative or designing a capstone project that reflects your interests, I’d be happy to connect.

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