Write Powerful College Essays

Write Powerful College Essays

Offered by Raul M.

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Get Into Your Dream College – Advice from a Wharton, Penn Law, USC, and UCS

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Studied at The Wharton School (UPenn)

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Package Description:

This package is designed for college applicants aiming to craft exceptional essays that maximize their chances of admission. This package includes the following, but feel free to adapt based on your unique situation and goals: - Initial Kickoff and Planning Session: Begin with an in-depth kickoff session with your coach to discuss your background, goals, experiences, and aspirations. This session sets the stage for creating compelling college essays. - Application Strategy: Collaborate with your coach to identify your unique points of differentiation as an applicant and strategize the best ways to highlight these in your essays. - Essay Brainstorming: Dive deep into your background and experiences with your coach to uncover themes, perspectives, and qualities that set you apart. Together, you’ll explore various narratives to ensure your essays capture your true essence. - Essay Crafting: Work with your coach to craft powerful narratives rooted in your unique story that help the admissions committee understand why you would be a valuable addition to their campus. - Essay Editing: After developing your essays' narratives, your coach will provide thorough editing and feedback, refining each draft until the essays are polished and ready for submission. Multiple rounds of edits ensure the final products are perfect. To summarize, this package pairs you with a world-class coach who will guide you through every step of creating standout college essays. They will offer honest and constructive feedback, ensuring your essays showcase your strengths and individuality.


What you'll get from this package

Compelling essays that are differentiated, personalized, and thoughtful — tailored to each school you decide to apply to

A deeper understanding of who you are, what impact you plan to have on the world, and why schools should care

An outline and several drafts of essays that get you closer to the final polished version that will stand out to admissions teams


Additional details

Coaching delivered via live sessions and .

Refund Policy

Additional expectations or terms of engagement may be provided by coaches (e.g. expected response times, etc.).

Services included:

Editing

Application Strategy

Essays


Raul M.

Offered by Raul M.

Joined November 2024

5.0

Get Into Your Dream College – Advice from a Wharton, Penn Law, USC, and UCS

I’ve successfully navigated the college admissions process and know what it takes to stand out. I hold four degrees—an MBA from Wharton, a Master of Laws (LLM) from Penn Law, a Master of Public Policy (MPP) from USC, and a BA in Economics from UCSB—and was admitted to Duke, UChicago, Columbia, Yale, Northwestern, NYU, USC, UCLA, Georgetown, and Wharton, among others. Coming from a non-traditional background, I had to craft applications that overcame challenges and highlighted my strengths in a compelling way. I specialize in helping students develop strong personal statements, strategic application narratives, and well-positioned extracurricular profiles to maximize their chances at top schools. Whether you’re aiming for the Ivy League or another highly selective institution, I’ll guide you through every step—from brainstorming essays to interview prep—so you submit an application that truly sets you apart.

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5h+ of coaching

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