Total price
$660
Coaching time
5 hours
Not currently taking new clients
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Package Description:
Package includes: • 30-minute introductory Zoom or phone call • 2 rounds of detailed feedback on the personal statement draft you submit • Priority service This package is for you if: • You’ve written your essay but don’t feel confident it’s going to get you in. • You want an expert opinion before hitting the “Submit” button. • You’ve gotten tons of feedback from parents, teachers, cousins, etc., but want to put all those influences aside and make sure your essay says what YOU want to say. What will working together be like? • Day 1: You send me your essay ahead of time, then tell me your concerns in a 30-minute Zoom or phone call. • Day 2: You get my initial round of feedback. • Days 3-4: You make your edits and submit to me. • Day 4-5: You get a final round of feedback. Response Time 24-hour turnaround and completed within 5 days Package Duration Up to 5 days NOTE: Limited availability before submission deadlines. Sign up as soon as you can to be sure to get this service.
What you'll get from this package
A vastly improved personal statement in time for submission.
Additional details
Coaching delivered via live sessions.
Services included:
Editing
Essays
Total price
$660
Coaching time
5 hours
Not currently taking new clients
Talk to a team member
Schedule a call with a Leland team member who can help you explore your options.
Schedule a call
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