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Mason L.

Mason Lai

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Cornell Undergrad & HS Valedictorian | Essay & UC PIQ Specialist

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About

Hi! I'm Mason, a freshman at Cornell studying cognitive science. A year ago I was exactly where your student is: staring at a blank Google Doc with the UC deadline coming up. I graduated as valedictorian of Palos Verdes Peninsula High School and was admitted to Cornell, UC Berkeley, UCSD, USC and Carnegie Mellon. I'm also a published poet (Beard Full of Butterflies, with work forthcoming in The Minnesota Review). I work with high school seniors on UC Personal Insight Questions, Common App personal statements and supplements. I'm a great fit if your student: - thinks their life is "too boring" to write about (it isn't) - has a draft that sounds impressive but doesn't sound like them - is tempted to let AI write it, and knows deep down it shouldn't How we work: we start by talking, not writing. I ask a lot of questions until we find the stories only you can tell. Then we shape them so every sentence earns its spot in 350 or 650 words. I leave detailed comments on every draft, and we talk them through live on Zoom. One rule: I never write or rewrite your sentences. Readers can often tell when an essay was written by an adult or an AI, and your voice is the whole point. My job is to help you find it, and maybe even enjoy using it.

Mason also coaches for AP Exams and SAT. View all.

Mason’s College Qualifications

I’m an undergraduate in the College of Arts & Sciences at Cornell University studying Cognitive Science, Information Science, and Philosophy, after graduating as Valedictorian of a top-ranked Southern California high school. During my own admissions cycle—where I was admitted to Cornell, UC Berkeley, Carnegie Mellon (CMU), USC, and UCSD—the biggest lesson I learned was that even when you have the grades and test scores, your actual, unfiltered voice matters infinitely more than anything AI or a generic formula can manufacture. In today’s post-AI admissions landscape, admissions officers can spot a sanitized, over-engineered essay in seconds. My specialty is figuring out what your student's true voice actually is, and giving them the confidence and strategic reasoning to bring it onto the page. As an essayist who has published poetry and humanities commentary alongside a heavy STEM background, I love working with students who bridge both technical and creative worlds—or who don't fit neatly into a single box. My philosophy is simple: the most compelling applications come from being unequivocally, unapologetically yourself. My coaching is highly structured and collaborative, combining detailed pre-session draft diagnostics with deep-dive 1-on-1 strategy to pull out the stories only you can tell for the Common App, UC Personal Insight Questions (PIQs), and school-specific supplements.

Mason can help with:

Application Strategy

Editing

Essays

School Selection

Secondary Review

Why do I coach?

When I was applying, nobody convinced me that my own voice was enough. I thought I had to be perfect and already have a perfect story. It took me way too long to realize the most compelling thing I could write about was just me, told honestly. That's why I coach. It's easier than ever to hand your story to an AI and get back something clean and forgettable. I want to be the person who tells you your real voice is worth more than that, and then helps you prove it. I also just really like people. In high school I led a two-year partnership running Sunday meal services at the Long Beach Rescue Mission and welcomed freshmen as a Link Crew leader. Now I study how people think. Helping someone figure out what they actually want to say is my favorite version of all of that.

Education

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Cornell University

Bachelor's Degree, Information Science

2026 - 2030

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