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Essay Editing (Personal Statement or School-Specific Supplement)

Essay Editing (Personal Statement or School-Specific Supplement)

Offered by Ashleigh R.

5.0

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Former Yale & Wesleyan Admissions Officer

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Studied at University of Connecticut

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Admissions Committee at Yale University

Description

The Essay Editing package provides personalized, in-depth support for a student's Personal Statement, school-specific supplemental essays, or the University of California (UC) Personal Insight Questions (PIQs). The package begins with a 30-minute meeting with Ashleigh to discuss prompts, essay content ideas, and topic choice. Following this meeting, students will receive two rounds of asynchronous essay edits, each with detailed written developmental and copy editing feedback. Ashleigh has extensive experience with essay development and editing. She has reviewed 25,000+ applications during her time in undergraduate admissions.


What you'll get from this package

A refined essay topic and structure, ensuring the essay tells a story that authentically represents the student

Two rounds of written, in-line feedback, addressing both big-picture developmental elements and line-level copy editing

A stronger, more compelling essay draft after each round of edits


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Ashleigh R.

Offered by Ashleigh R.

Joined September 2026

5.0

Former Yale & Wesleyan Admissions Officer

Ashleigh Redding is a former Ivy League admissions officer with 13+ years of experience in higher education. Ashleigh completed her BA in Latin American Studies at Wesleyan University. She also holds an MBA through the University of Connecticut. Ashleigh spent 13 years working in undergraduate admissions at two highly selective institutions: Yale University and Wesleyan University. During her eight years at Yale, Ashleigh covered admissions territories across the U.S. and around the world, voted in hundreds of admissions committees, and oversaw all domestic recruitment. Throughout her time in admissions, Ashleigh covered both domestic and international admissions territories. Her domestic territories included: California, Massachusetts, New Jersey, New York, and Texas. Ashleigh's international territories included: the United World Colleges and South Asia.

Coaches professionally

10+ College clients

$1,400

4h of coaching