MBA Essay Review
We will do a quick intro call so that I can get a sense of your goals and background. Once you send me your resume and essay(s) for one school, I will independently review the essays before we meet together to discuss live. I was accepted into Kellogg's MMM Program, so happy to also look at that prompt as well! We will work together so that you can tell your story in the most compelling way. At the end of our session, you will receive a marked up version of your original essay that includes comments and revisions. For all packages, I can provide additional insights on these schools, such as clubs or programs that you may want to include. When I applied, I did a lot of the research, so let me take some of the heavy lifting off of your shoulders! While the price is based on "1 hour" of live coaching, this also includes the additional time I will be spending looking over your essay and doing additional research on the side to see what else you can incorporate.
What's included
- Live and written feedback
- Suggested school-specific considerations
- Light stylistic edits and rewording
- Grammar review
Meet your expert

Tracy V.
From first-gen, low-income to Wharton MBA
I am an incoming McKinsey Associate and on break before my start date! I studied anthropology at Stanford before joining J.P. Morgan Private Bank as an investment specialist. After 6 years there, I went to Wharton for my MBA to pivot into a consulting career. Coming from a first-generation, low-income background, I needed to hustle to understand the admissions process. I'm excited to share my process with you and help you think of a game plan and craft an application that truly reflects you. I also very much enjoyed the consulting recruiting process (I used to do case interviews to procrastinate school work). I had spent hundreds of hours researching each firm, networking, and casing before landing a summer internship at McKinsey. Afterwards, I was a Consulting Career Fellows through the Career Management Center and a Case Parent for Wharton's Consulting Club. During that time, I coached and advised 50+ students, with many receiving MBB offers, and would love to help you navigate the recruiting process too. As a former academic tutor during my undergraduate years, I feel strongly about teaching and understand that each person requires customization to fit their needs. I look forward to working with you. I offer 2 primary services: 1. McKinsey/MBB specialist offering, including case interview prep (coached 20+ students to MBB offers), behavioral interview prep, resume review, and networking advice 2. MBA admissions process - I can help you with your game plan, resume, essay, LOR strategy, and interview prep