Essay Review & Editing (By Target School)
This package is for applicants who have essay drafts in hand—anywhere from a rough first draft to nearly finished—and want expert eyes on them. Ahead of our live session, I'll read through your essays (including essays, supplementary essays, and short answer questions) and leave in-depth edits/comments/feedback. We'll then meet for a live debrief session to talk through the feedback and map out next steps. Common coaching activities in this package include, but are not limited to: • Written Feedback: Detailed, actionable comments on structure, storytelling, clarity, and tone across all essays for your selected school • Live Debrief: We'll walk through my feedback together, answer your questions, and align on revisions • Cross-Essay Check: I'll make sure your essays work together as a set and stay true to your overall story. Note: Applicants have the option to book additional time if they choose to continuation iteration on the essay pack
What's included
- Essay drafts that are clearer, more compelling, and more you
- Specific next steps to take your essays to the finish line
- Honest feedback so you know your essays are on track
Meet your expert
Cami K.
Current Stanford MBA | Story Formation & Essay Help for MBA Applicants
Hi! I'm Cami. Originally from Los Angeles, I'm so excited to be back in California pursuing my MBA at Stanford Graduate School of Business. I spent the last 4 years before moving to Palo Alto in New York City, and I received my undergraduate degree from Vanderbilt University (anchor down!) in Nashville, Tennessee. Prior to the GSB, I worked in management consulting, where I found that I loved helping people grow, especially when it came to communication and storytelling. That's the same energy I bring to coaching. My goal is to help you find your voice, tell your story in a way that feels true to you, and make the process feel a little less stressful (and hopefully even a little fun). Outside of work and school, some of my passions include distance running, hiking, and traveling (48 countries and counting!). I can't wait to get to know you as we take on this journey together!
