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Written Statement Review | European Finance MSc

Sentence-level written feedback on your finance MSc statement from an Oxford MFE (Distinction) graduate, plus the two or three changes that will improve it most. Written only, feedback within 2 working days.

Kevin B.
By Kevin B.5.0· 22 reviewsOxford MFE | European Finance MSc Expert | Oxbridge, HEC & Bocconi admits

For applicants to Oxford, Cambridge, LSE, LBS, HEC Paris, Bocconi and similar programmes who have a draft and want an expert read before submitting. What you get: - Comments on specific sentences that explain what isn’t working, why it matters and how to fix it - Feedback on how you present your quantitative and finance work, not just the writing - A short note naming the two or three changes that matter most - Feedback within 2 working days, often sooner Options: - 1 round: one review of your draft - 2 rounds: a second review once you’ve revised it This is written feedback only, with no call. If you’d like to talk it through, the Application Package includes calls.

What's included

1h of coaching$200/hr · Asynchronous Work$200
Total$200

From a recent client

5.0

Incredibly Fast, Professional, and Insightful!

I had a fantastic experience working with Kevin! What impressed me the most was how incredibly responsive he was. I sent him my personal statement in the morning and received detailed feedback that same afternoon! When you're working with tight application deadlines, this kind of turnaround really makes a difference. Kevin is also extremely professional and clearly knows his stuff. His strong academic background means he can genuinely understand the more technical aspects of my statement, rather than just focusing on the writing itself. What I particularly appreciated was how structured and actionable his feedback was. He explained exactly where the issues were, why they mattered, and how I could address them.

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November 2026

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What you get

  • Comments on specific sentences: what isn’t working, why it matters, how to fix it
  • Feedback on how you present your quantitative and finance work
  • A short note naming the two or three changes that matter most
  • Feedback within 2 working days, often sooner

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Meet your expert

Kevin B.

Kevin B.

Oxford MFE | European Finance MSc Expert | Oxbridge, HEC & Bocconi admits

5.022 reviews
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I help applicants get into elite European finance master’s programmes, including Oxford, Cambridge, HEC Paris, LSE, Imperial, LBS and Bocconi. I also prepare candidates for investment banking interviews. Clients have been admitted to the Oxford MSc Financial Economics, Cambridge MFin, HEC Paris MSc International Finance and Bocconi MSc Finance. Banking clients have taken offers at J.P. Morgan, Greenhill, ING and Natixis. I completed the Oxford MSc Financial Economics with Distinction and received an offer from HEC Paris after their panel interview. I then joined Rothschild & Co in healthcare M&A. Since then: valuations at Kroll, climate strategy at ERM, transition finance at the City of London Corporation. MSc admissions Most of my clients have some work experience, and that is usually where the strongest material is. We identify the experiences that carry your application, often ones you’ve undervalued, and build each school’s essays around them. Oxford, Cambridge and HEC each read applications differently, so every application gets its own angle that you can defend at interview. You get sentence-level feedback on your CV and essays, and interview preparation with questions specific to each programme. Investment banking interviews I interned at ING and Rothschild and converted the Rothschild internship into a full-time analyst offer. I prepare candidates for internship and full-time interviews: your story, your technicals, and mock interviews built around the questions candidates most often get wrong. The best first step is a 15-minute intro call. Tell me which programmes or banks you’re targeting and where your application stands. I’ll tell you whether I’m the right coach for it and how we would work together.

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