Price
$550
Coaching time
1 hour
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Description
This session provides a focused, admissions-level review of your personal statement with an emphasis on narrative strength, clarity, and positioning. Rather than line-by-line editing, the goal is to identify what is working, what is weakening your application, and how admissions committees are likely to perceive your story. You’ll receive direct feedback on your motivation for medicine, depth of reflection, and whether your essay clearly differentiates you from other applicants. Common red flags: such as vague motivation, résumé-style writing, or misaligned themes, are explicitly identified. Format: 60-minute 1:1 live review Best for: Applicants with a completed or near-complete draft seeking honest, high-level feedback before submission.
What you'll get from this package
Evaluation of clarity, coherence, and differentiation of your personal statement from an admissions committee perspective.
Explicit identification of vague motivation, résumé-style writing, or misaligned themes that weaken impact.
Clear, prioritized guidance on what to revise first to maximize essay effectiveness.
Additional details
Coaching delivered via live sessions.
Services included:
Personal Statement
Price
$550
Coaching time
1 hour
Not currently taking new clients
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Schedule a call with a Leland team member who can help you explore your options.
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