The MBA Essay Perfectionist: Final Review & Proofreading

The MBA Essay Perfectionist: Final Review & Proofreading

Offered by Karla M.

4.9

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150+ M7 Admits | AdCom-Trained Strategist | Leland Top Coach ('23 & '24)

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Studied at Harvard University

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Works at J.P. Morgan & Co.

Package Description:

The purpose of this package is to assist individuals who have already written their essays by providing support in the areas of editing, revising, and analyzing how the essays aligns with their overall candidacy. For competitive programs, applicants are differentiated by small touches and if you want to ensure your essays go from 95th percentile to 99th+, this is the package for you. Here is the process we will follow for this package: ◉ Initial Consultation and Assessment - We will begin with a live session to discuss your background, profile, and aspirations ◉ Essay Drafting and Revision - I will provide comprehensive feedback on your essay's content, style, and tone, as well as suggestions for improvement. This package includes two asynchronous revisions, with a 30-minute live debrief after each one ◉ Final Editing and Polishing - I will conduct a thorough review of your final essay drafts, examining them for consistency, coherence, and errors, and we will work together to make any final edits needed Further details: ◉ 1 MBA app essay review = all short-form essays as well as principal essays in the application ◉ Consortium Core and Membership essays are equivalent to 1 MBA app - essay review package


What you'll get from this package

Convincing and well-organized essays that adeptly convey your individual narrative and exhibit your suitability for the desired MBA program(s)

Thoughtful analysis of how the essays integrate into your comprehensive application


Additional details

Coaching delivered via live sessions and .

My coaching style is focused on building a strong rapport with applicants because I recognize how critical the MBA application process is for them. I aim to establish a friendly and collaborative relationship with my clients, which allows us to work together effectively towards achieving their goals. When it comes to editing, I am prompt and efficient. Typically, I take no more than a few hours to return the edited work to my clients. My general rule is that I will have the edits back within 24 hours, ensuring that there are no delays in the application process. I also make myself available via text and other informal channels, such as email or phone, to ensure clear and prompt communication, which helps us to work more efficiently together.

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Services included:

Editing

Essays


Karla M.

Offered by Karla M.

Joined August 2022

4.9

150+ M7 Admits | AdCom-Trained Strategist | Leland Top Coach ('23 & '24)

With over a decade of experience, I’ve helped candidates break into the world’s most competitive MBA and master’s programs, consistently delivering results across applicant types and industries. My unique qualifications include: ◉ Leland Top Coach in both 2023 and 2024 (since rankings began), with reviews attesting to strategic, high-touch coaching ◉ 150+ M7 admits and tens of millions in scholarship funding secured across MBA, MPP, and master’s programs ◉ Proven success with traditional (consulting, banking), deferred, joint-degree, international, and non-traditional candidates ◉ At Harvard Kennedy School, collaborated directly with the head of Admissions to revamp evaluation processes and led formal knowledge-sharing with M7 MBA programs (e.g., HBS, Wharton, Booth) to align HKS selection standards with leading graduate admissions practices With deep insight into how top programs evaluate applicants, I specialize in translating resumes into compelling narratives that highlight leadership, trajectory, and potential. Some big wins include helping an individual with a 3.2 GPA and 145 (Quant GRE) / 158 (Verbal GRE) secure admission to a top 5 MBA with 60% tuition scholarship and negotiating another candidate's M7 waitlist offer to admission with 100% tuition funding. Given my client-facing experience, I am extremely responsive and usually take no more than 24 hours to turn around materials. I am especially helpful to: ◉ applicants from established pre-MBA careers (e.g., consulting, banking) hoping to differentiate themselves in a crowded field ◉ international applicants looking for guidance on the U.S.-specific nuances for MBAs ◉ non-traditional candidates without cookie-cutter GPAs or test scores looking to highlight strengths in other areas ◉ deferred candidates looking to show their future *potential* through storytelling ◉ candidates seeking scholarship funding ◉ underrepresented minorities, especially LGBTQ+ / BIPOC applicants, who want to work with someone with a shared lived experience ◉ joint / concurrent degree applicants ◉ candidates who want to make a great impression during interviews. I take special pride in one of my interviewers saying I was the best-prepared applicant he had seen in 10 years :) ◉ waitlisted or rejected applicants who want to make a compelling case for their candidacy through informal channels

Coaches professionally

250+ people coached for MBA

Open to working with clients outside the U.S.

Starting at $700

1h+ of coaching

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